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Old 10-14-05, 08:47 AM   #1
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Checking in will be due by Sunday's Midnight{EST TIME}.
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Old 10-14-05, 11:47 AM   #2
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aight here is me check....goodluck
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Old 10-14-05, 10:48 PM   #3
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wordness...checking in...good luck to u too
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Old 10-15-05, 03:57 PM   #4
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All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you
..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit

blah
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Old 10-16-05, 06:40 PM   #5
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come on rile dont wait till tuesday to drop man lets go
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Old 10-16-05, 07:55 PM   #6
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Old 10-16-05, 11:07 PM   #7
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ill drop...I've been busy yo... but Ill prolly have it tomorrow or Tuesday..dont worry, it will be good haha
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Old 10-16-05, 11:14 PM   #8
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comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday
he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway

meh... at least I posted schweet lol
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Old 10-17-05, 01:46 PM   #9
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All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you
..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit
^^yeah like you said, "blah" no real punch to this, threat and "like" bar combined = hard to make dope

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comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday
he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway
^^good concept, badly worded and stretched, but it hits saying he's a comp nerd etc.

v/rile1
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Old 10-17-05, 04:17 PM   #10
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I meant to put " he would go to hell if I smashed his gateway" but its w/e... thanks Vas
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Old 10-17-05, 06:43 PM   #11
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i thought defined's carpenter like was pretty weak to be honest. the punchline was poorly structured. rile1 got straight to the point with a wittier punch.

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Old 10-18-05, 08:22 AM   #12
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v/ rile1

wow real1 and rile1 sound nothing alike so i don't even know what the point of defined's set up was
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Old 10-18-05, 02:23 PM   #13
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^^LOL well thats how I pronounce it...thanks for votes...keep them coming!
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Old 10-18-05, 02:52 PM   #14
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v/ rile both punches were subpar but his was at least decent
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Old 10-18-05, 05:09 PM   #15
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All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you
..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit

Blah, this punch was ok nothing special. no personals. it was a self glorifying diss basically. it wasn;t a direct punch feel me...6/10


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comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday
he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway

LOL wtf. this was garbage. i wasnt feelin this at all. it didnt even make snes. i give it. 2/10

vote: defined

weak battle
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