i challenge you, 15 bars, you start
first to 5 votes

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3-0 is ko

i saw you browsing this forum, you're quick to dip out, huh?

iight yo im here

u start nigga u made da challenge-besides i got otha dudes who r battelin me now- so u go 1st

iight yo fuck it-

EYO, EYO, IM BIOLOGICALLY REMOVIN LIMBS FRUM A SO CALLED PRODIGY - U RUNNIN WIT DA CRAZY THOUGHT OF BECOMIN A GREEK MYTHOLOGY- DA TABLES R TURNED "IM DA MYSTICAL MASTERMIND"- PLAY ONE IN A MILLION IM HARD 2 FIND. I HANG YA RHYMES OVA DA BALCONY LIKE MIKE JACKSON DID HIS KIDS - DIS KIDS OUTRAGEOUS - HIZ RHYMEZ R WHACK 1 CENT 4 DA 1ST BID.DIS KID IZ SCARED DA LIK DA CLIT SO HE SUCKS DA DICK AND CALLS ELTON JOHN HIS BITCH HOW U GONNA MISTAKE 9 DICKS 4 PUSSY-U DONT NOE WHAT IM CAPABLE OF SO NIGGA PLEAZE DONT PUSH ME.

UR TURN

biologically rippin my limbs?, that is kinda hard to do//
since that is only phyiscally possible, you fuckin stupid jew//
so who's that mastermind obviously not you, you just a damn monkey you should get your ass to the zoo//
in there you could have a chance of winning a battle, maybe//
cuz lately i been rippin niggas who think they can play me//
you just a gay G, who gets ass raped on the daily. so stop tryin to hate me//
battling you is like fighting a baby, there's no complexity to deal with//
my words are what i kill with, that is why everyone gotta feel this//
i'm done with you there is no reason to carry on//
i'll just add you to list of niggas who got buried on//

my links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=32329

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=32310

uppin for some votes

ok you 2 funny fools
both verses were aight
I liked mystic's first couple lines
I liked the middle of play's verse and his vocab
at first I liked play's rhyme
but since MYSTIC was flowing NATURAL like bob marley
I vote for mystic

aiight aiight
1-0

uppin' for some more votes people

Ok

Play-
your first two lines were the best part of your whole verse, everything after that was either a weak punchline or a filler line.

Mystic-
You had a better structure to your verse and it also flowed better, though your punches weren't that hard either.

VOTE-Mystic

Play- punches where weak, mad fillers,i didnt see much creativity.didnt feel the verse

Mystic- liked the flow a little better and used more punches.not the strongest punches ive seen but enough to take this

vote-MysticaMastermind

play....exactly like mtclips said alot of filler..nothing really good

mystic..need better punches..but it was aight.

vote - mystic