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01-23-06, 04:53 PM
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Odi et Amo
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Crazy Hades vs. .:~SoldieR~:.
IP: 897D 9ED0
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01-23-06, 09:13 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 3CD3 1403
Checkin-in good luck
My Topic - The seeing eye
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01-25-06, 04:08 PM
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#3
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Just searching.
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IP: 8262 49AE
I'm hungry and fasting. FUCK. At least it'll clear my mind. between migraines.
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01-27-06, 06:09 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 8262 49AE
Okay...well, this'll be easy. And I'm referring to the entire league.
God is Dead
Look where I'm standing, a monolithic obelisk of ruby quartz oozing crimson, wooing women are preaching heaven's words through the process of singing, clinging to their white habits, drawing their oblong shawls closer to their skull, plastered with the blood of saints that penetrates the sad sunken ship's hull. The destroyer drops its depth charges, clergies are talking in abating octaves, adhering to a law devised on one of paradise's off days. He pulls the trenchcoat closer to his form, preserving the dwindling warmth, as the wind changes its course in a vain attempt to rip the crows from their perch as the untamed Raven calls out "Nevermore". It's referring to a time in the past most people do not oblige to tell children, where mothers were whirling about in desperation to recover lost kinsmen. He plays chess with the heavens, tightens his turban and glances aft, reminiscing of a devestating time uncanny in a time where everyone had, perfect peace, ruled by a church born from a bottle of ink and a quill. Not claiming heresy, the thing that brought us into a time of intense hate, but what's he thinking is along the lines of the events leading to the Crusades. Everyone's dropped into a Well of Ignorance, possessing a name that implies satisfaction, dropping to the reserves of humanity's rarely surfacing sense of required action. The realization is shrouded by a cloud of faith and belief that is unshakable, something grand and to be treasured as long as a taste of blood is satiable. He sketches on the obelisk to the fallen: This is a place for my deceased brethren as well, here's a place for me to vent, some people don't understand that the Birth of Jesus is an astronomical event. Virgo gave birth to the El's 'sun', and there's more etched in constellations. Also, how can you not see that the stories are comparable to things written for recreation? To explain things, and it's heinous to hold onto the belief everything is true, but you can't see it's a way to explain things, a myth like those of Cherokees and Hindus. Follow your Ten Commandments, believe in that omnipresent being in the next dimension, who provides us with heavenly attention and intervention like adrenaline to lift cars from children. And it's seldom to think and believe that someone may not have died for us, never cried for us so we can live another day and continue that cycle of, life, that precious thing that explains how our flesh returns to our proud Earth, and gives feed to the flowers and that fertilizes the plowed and mowed dirt. So try not to recreate a thing like the Crusades, a relatively unknown date that bloodied a clean slate. The next day, the Muslim returned to the obelisk next to the church, and read the graffiti some people had etched around and upon his words. 'Heathen' and 'idiot', they cried; 'burn in hell' and 'you claim Jesus didn't exist, you filthy bastard? Goddamn treacherous lies.' Amadeus Wolfgang Saladin, the Muslim named after the famous Austrian composer known as Mozart, stared at the obelisk and shook his head. The sunset above him, the salmon sky covered in red and orange streaks created by a broad paintbrush. A patch of hair fell from Amadeus' head, followed by more and more. Dead skin followed, until the Muslim was turned to a long-haired man with golden hair as resplendent as the sun. "People need to beat their children more," the Savior said, walking away quietly. Word. Last edited by Crazy Hades : 01-27-06 at 06:13 PM. |
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01-27-06, 06:33 PM
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#5
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Just searching.
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IP: 8262 49AE
Close this. I won with a half-assed verse no matter what he drops.
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01-27-06, 06:35 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
lol, let's wait, i might no show tho...........
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01-27-06, 06:37 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 8262 49AE
Uhm. You might no-show? You're Soldier, meaning you have two battles? I'm too lazy to match IPs. But close it, I won.
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01-27-06, 06:41 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
oh shit lmao.......i didn't notice i placed i, i ment to say he....hell no i ain't soldier.......lol.
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01-27-06, 06:44 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 8262 49AE
So why isn't this closed?
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01-27-06, 07:18 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
reopened since he pm'ed me right now to say he was gonna drop
Last edited by Tech Skillz : 01-27-06 at 09:15 PM. |
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01-28-06, 10:54 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 3CD3 1403
The Seeing Eye
The grass surrounds the distances across the blue sky The water covers the rocks beneath the surface The Mountains cover the clouds past the valleys And the seeing eye revolves around in a circle A writer, a poet, died in 1983 by the nickname of Life a hidden mysterious piece was found this is what was written ....In My Room - Staring out my Window.... Only in the distances is a storm so beautiful with redicule stuck in our world like trapped in a cubicle 4 walls surround you, with nothing but a bed with one sheet, and 1 flat pillow to rest your head you listen for any noises that you hear outside then suddenly a crash is heard. You open your eyes wide ....I walk to the Family Area.... I see no movements - the room is dark and dense Noone is talking - i hear silence I see 2 bodies lying on the floor naked The outside door is open where someone evacuated ....I fall on my knees and watch the area again.... I see blood and vessels exploded Scents of disgust of bodies eroded Carpets are stained, walls are drenched darkness of silence i watch in suspence im shivered and quivered i watch their life flicker im quicker to react as my insides get sicker i watch dramatically and impatiently i glare at my parents who are settled stationley im scarred for life at the visions that haunt thee the aspects of life that continually want me i fall and go to sleep as i dream nightmares i awake to my fears at wut the awful images that stare ....15 years later in 1982.... I sit in a straight jacket surrounded by idiots there insane postured ridicule quick shits im in a mental institution where i see my thoughts i think of my parents... everytime i hear a sound that resembles gun shots To just find out i held the gun as i seen them die Everything i remember through The Seeing Eye ....1 year later in 1983.... Before i hang myself with these sheets i want everyone to remember what the devil speaks i aww in pain - and i tremble in fear hopefully when im dead you find me here To make the long story short we remember him for his talents For the very last piece he wrote The grass dies and they sky turns gray The waters green the rocks decay The Mountains cover the bright sky but Nothing can be noticed with the seeing eye
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01-28-06, 11:03 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: 9465 0DDF
hadez takes this man.........creativity, Emotion, and Vocab. he just crushed SOLDIER man DAMN..............thats sick.....its gonna be a real tough one for when i face you homes....
cuz i know i won against Oz..........his topic was just played. i guess but yea i give this to hades. *NUFF SAID* rtf on my battle against Oz. i guess thats how it goes.
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01-28-06, 05:06 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 0825 899A
fucking hades stop winning.. im sitting atop everyone right now and youre making this difficult for me...
anyways good verse from CH.. alot of good vocab and raw emotion... good storyline overall it was a good piece soldier... you suck v/ CH
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01-29-06, 10:07 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 3CD3 1403
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lol no i just didnt try - i did my verse in 10 minutes - anywayz uppin
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01-29-06, 10:13 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
well try next time....!!!
vote-hades no need to explain... winner:hades |
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