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÷Thìñg÷ 5 100.00%
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Old 01-31-04, 09:14 PM   #16
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Old 01-31-04, 09:15 PM   #17
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I would go with Thing as well. He had his shit together. Sorry newbie.
 
Old 02-01-04, 06:43 PM   #18
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Old 02-03-04, 05:07 PM   #19
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jae, you tried to impress with your vocab, but your punches were weak, your wordplay wasn't the best, an you had hardly, if not any attempts at personals.
you need to make your punches, direct an hard hitting!!

thing, yours wasnt the best, but your punches hit, they were consistant, wordplay wasn't too bad, you had a good verse, but it was still weak, you gotta elevate, an make your punches hit a little harder!!

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better verse!!

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Old 02-06-04, 06:09 PM   #20
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Not good on either part...

Jeagutta, wow your just damn confusing, your punches were non-existant and half of your vocab is way out of context....had u of chilled wit the multi's focused on the punches an shortened your structure u mighta won this one....but wait...I jus said to change your whole verse....

Thing, You came very wak here, basic, nothing special.....You punches were there but blah....One thing u had goin for u was structure....this helped your personals and flo....By far less of what I had expected, but alot better than Jeagutta

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Old 02-07-04, 01:53 AM   #21
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Jae Gutta
Common decency-is a THING wit' me-recently-these emcees-think ta be-ill and have beef wit' me/ I secretly-freak a beat-and bring the heat-makin' this phony rethink even comin' ta speak wit' me//
i'm sneaky...-and anxiety got the whole board perspirin'-and I'm still bullshittin', aint even let start spittin fire, kids/
Two pliars fit-my utility belt perfectly-certainly-wit' a tighter grip-I could leave ya mics wireless-jump Back 2 The Future and delete all of ya prior spits//
Supremecy is mine, I oversee, I'm impossible-ta topple, fool-in solitude-I sit in my throne unshaken but volitle//
Currently-I'm concerned wit' these-bitches that've been workin' these-boards and I've been warned they may start murkin' me haha/
Work wit' me-I OWN rap words I birth wit' ease...-cursin' me-won't bewitch or bewilder me, I slay this herbs wit' keys//
I won't accept blatent disrespect from these-babies that call themselves neglectin' me-step ta me-please repeat all that you've said ta me/
Steadily-steady-yourself and ready-your auxiliary arsenal-parsels and articles-of armor ta be held under dreadful siege/......only time-you will be ill if u became my student and started working for me//


Eh..
Kinda weak.....
Structure was horrible
Punches were semi weak
Personals were weak also
Wordplay was decent.....
Overall.......12/20




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Thing
whats up jea-guttah...wtf is ya major malfunction kiddo?
from michigan but studdas n this combustion ya not a sicko
avy is jackson so wants 2 malest boys...thats so gayesh
lazy like false tracktion...fondals at a path but dont kill It
cuz ya cant prosude this unknown talent Its just enivitable
& ya herb ass wining this is errevatable...skills so eatable
hit the curb wit spinings of my best strikes cuz im the sandman
lit up ya face like jackolanterns at halloween im leather face..man
ya done when you try to battle omfg yer so owned,so destroyed
ya stunned when I rip ya back plate out ya bones,so ya evoid



Better...
Good structure
Personals were decent
Punches were denently hard hitting
Wordplay was ... eh... what can i say
It was decent...............................
Overall.......14.5/20


V/Thing
Came better overal..
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