i seriously do not understand what verse yall read from ILLunatic, but it must not have been the one i read. there was ONE punch in there that was DECENT,

"Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line"

and even that's not that great. i wasn't really impressed with that verse, and don't come with that, 'yeah i was tired, couldnt drop my hardest shit,' because nobody gives a fuck, that's your fault, not ours.

Formula came WAY more consistant with the punches, and this punch alone beat "ILL"

"Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. ."

Neither one of you had a great flow throughout, so that isn't even a factor in my vote.
Honestly, people on Rapbattles.com are stupid as fuck.

Vote - Formula.

__________________
<center><b>true..</b></center>

Thanks ^^ Upping. . .Upping. . Votes. . Drop Links. . kthnx.

__________________

God Damn. . Hit This. . Drop Links. . This'll Be The Fourth Battle That Hasn't Gotten Adequate Votes. . I'm Gonna Hit Up Battles, But Some Of You Heads Who Are Around 24/7, Vote On This, I Can't Be On All The Time. . Pz.

__________________

::Tisk:: ::Tisk:: ::Tisk:: ::Tisk::
This damn battle still open.... geez

__________________

Form

Ok, This Fuck Tryna Play Hero For Credz. . .
No Balls, So He Has To Hold His Boy's Instead. . .
decent opening... if u had worded it better it woulda hit harder
Before This Shit Even Started, Shoulda Known You Was Done
I Dissed, Then You Dissed, Hey. . Like Father, Like Son. . .
good punch..very creative the way u used the concept and i was feelin it alot
You Were Never Ill, So You Put It In Ya Name To Feel Special
Can't Read, You're Not Cred, Even Wacker, Lemme Help You
no rhyme...1st line was a shit personal and 2nd line had no punch
I'll Attack You Dude, Just Like The Crew, I'ma Get Um. .
Ya Punches Are Pussy N Passed Over Like A Snake W/ No Venom
so-so punch...not that great
Serious, I Have A Tougher Time Lightin' Ciggs In The Wind. .
Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. .
not feelin the rhyme again.. and the not a good punch either
You Think Big Words'll Win You Brownie Points ? . . . Please. . .
Get Ya Boy Credz N Ya Can Both Down My Joint, Then Hop Off My Nuts N Ya Knees
again..not a good punch...played concept and wasnt good
You Insist On Gettin' Pissed, Stickin' Ya Nose Where It Don't Belong. .
Well After This Verse, This Lunatic Who Think He Dope. . .
. . . . Will Be Clowned On RB More Than A Mainstream Song. . .
stretched last line...it was just an ok ending


Ill

Time to break down this formula, cuz he's chemically twisted
???FormulaMC??? its more like that bitch has never existed
not really a hard punch...just an ok opening
Look, you made the line limit, and you couldn't even follow
Thinkin you throwin packed punches? them bitches is hollow
decent personal in the first line and 2nd line was good
Peep ya crew, ya'll suck and ready for an 'instant' clowning
.:K:., LM, Phsyik, Freeman..justa roster got ya'll instant downing
not bad wordplay here...punch wasnt bad either
Its an embarassment, My name next to yours on the headline?
Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line
good punch...
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
me 2 Ill, me 2, u wanna be my friend Form?
"Can't I eat just one more mc?" this hoecake must love to eat splean
Lemme just improvise quickly,He likes to eat textcee's disease clean?
another decent personal and hitting punch
Ya nersurry rhymes are to childish to win you this battle, so step back
Ya rep's wack, battlin? why attempt that, when ya flows are that wack
good closer to finish it off


overall - ILL took this battle..he was more consistent with hard punches... Form u had that one dope punch wit father and son, and that was basically it..ill kept decent and good punches through out...looks like another easy no effort win for ill

V/ Ill

__________________

3-0......
Ugh Oh....
VOTE PEOPLE
..................
LMFAO at Celestials vote

__________________

punches -simply go to iLLuna cuz had mad potencial in them
they were easily directed more efficiantly than formula`s punches were
personals -also go to iLL cuz he was bringing up his past merks and it was clever
For .. ..MC had some nice persons butt came sort of choppy if you dont mind me saying
werdplay -id say that both werdplay in this was pretty much tie
accept for the fact that iLL`s was a lil better approached
multis stricly goes to iLL,for .. ..MC had lacked multis
creativity has to go in favor of iLL cuz his multis speak for themselves,witty
other goes to iLL .. ..for .. ..MC had everything else at hand but didnt hold on hard enough,as for the rest of the catagories iLL domanated
vote iLLunatic


hit my battles in my sig in return

Hmmm.. since Token DQ'd a vote
Its 3-0 again.......................

__________________

ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz
ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz
ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz
ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz
ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz
^Thats all i see here^

__________________

uppin for the homie....................................

Oops, that must be a typo ..

All I see here is Dickriding.

__________________
<center><b>true..</b></center>

Word ^ Lots Of Sleeping. . Half Of RB Owns Sleeping Bags. . Gah Damn.

__________________

Ok, This Fuck Tryna Play Hero For Credz. . .
No Balls, So He Has To Hold His Boy's Instead. . .
*NOT REAL IMPRESSED WITH NE THING HERE*

Before This Shit Even Started, Shoulda Known You Was Done
I Dissed, Then You Dissed, Hey. . Like Father, Like Son. . .
* AN OK ATTEMPT AT SOMETHIN COMPLEXT..NOT BAD

You Were Never Ill, So You Put It In Ya Name To Feel Special
Can't Read, You're Not Cred, Even Wacker, Lemme Help You
*AGH...STARTED OK THEN...AGH..I D K WAT HAPPENED*

I'll Attack You Dude, Just Like The Crew, I'ma Get Um. .
Ya Punches Are Pussy N Passed Over Like A Snake W/ No Venom
*NOT A BAD PUNCH LINES..NEED 2 ELEVATE MORE

Serious, I Have A Tougher Time Lightin' Ciggs In The Wind. .
Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. .
*GETTIN BETTER...NICE PUNCH FLOW..
You Think Big Words'll Win You Brownie Points ? . . . Please. . .
Get Ya Boy Credz N Ya Can Both Down My Joint, Then Hop Off My Nuts N Ya Knees
*NICE PUNCH*
You Insist On Gettin' Pissed, Stickin' Ya Nose Where It Don't Belong. .
Well After This Verse, This Lunatic Who Think He Dope. . .
. . . . Will Be Clowned On RB More Than A Mainstream Song. . .
*NOT A BAD LITTLE PUNCH...OVERALL OK*

OVERALL: 6/10 (NEED TO ELEVATE..PLAIN AND SIMPLE*)



Time to break down this formula, cuz he's chemically twisted
???FormulaMC??? its more like that bitch has never existed
*PUNCH AND FLOW WHERE OK..NOTHIN SPEC* (FROM U)

Look, you made the line limit, and you couldn't even follow
Thinkin you throwin packed punches? them bitches is hollow
*IVE SEEN BETTER FROM U..NOT THAT IMPRESSED*

Peep ya crew, ya'll suck and ready for an 'instant' clowning
.:K:., LM, Phsyik, Freeman..justa roster got ya'll instant downing
*PUNCH WAS LIL OFF..BUT THE CREW PERSONAL WAS TAKEN*

Its an embarassment, My name next to yours on the headline?
Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line
*NICE PUNCH*
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
*AGH..OK NUTTA SPECIAL

"Can't I eat just one more mc?" this hoecake must love to eat splean
Lemme just improvise quickly,He likes to eat textcee's disease clean?
*OK PUNCH..DECIENT FLOW...*
Ya nersurry rhymes are to childish to win you this battle, so step back
Ya rep's wack, battlin? why attempt that, when ya flows are that wack
*NICE FLOW...OK PUNCH*

OVERALL: 8/10

PUNCHES...ILL
FLOW..ILL
STRUCTURE...tie
VOCAB..TIE
WORDPLAY..ILL
OVERALL..ILL

ILL JUST HAD THE BETTER VERSE

GOOD JOB 2 BOTH MC'S..

AND GOOD LUCK

*HOPE THATS LONG ENOUGH 4 ALL YALL*

__________________
THE RESTRICTED WUN HAS ROZE 2 CONQUER.....AGAIN!


I'M BACK!!!

ILLUNATIC
PUNCHES:8/10
FLOW:7/10
PERSONALS:6/10
STRUCTURE:7/10
TOTAL SCORE FOR ILL IS 28/40
ILL CAME PRETTY HARD U DID PRETTY GOOD IN EVERY CATEGORY WHAT CAN I SAY.......
FORMULA
PUNCHES:5/10
FLOW:6/10
PERSOANALS:5/10
STRUCTURE:6/10
UR TOTAL SCORE IS 22/40
NOT BAD FORMULA THE ONLY THING THAT REALLY HURT YA WAS UR VOCAB WAS KIND BASIC BUT EVERY THING ELSE WAS PRETTY GOOD
BUT THE TOTALS SAY IT ALL ILL GOT THIS
VOTE :ILLUNATIC
NO BEEF BUT CAN YALL VOTE ON THIS THANX
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112614

__________________
<a target='_blank' href='http://www.mymailsignature.com'><br><img src='http://www.mymailsignature.com/fwpdata/54/45/5f/f2/3A8E880A-615A-11D8-9684-8ADD4DE9B824sig.png' border=0></a>