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Voted For: .Wicked One.

Aiight look.. I dont wanna sound like an asshole, but both of you need to elevate a lot in text battling.. A lot of the wordplay you were both trying to use didnt help any disses at all.. Some of your bars were just useless filler.. WAY too much self glorification.. Intensify you need to seriously work on your structure.. And both of you need to work on multi syllable rhyming..

I'm gonna give this vote to Wicked One mainly because I had less trouble catching his flow.. But seriously man, you need BIG work on punchlines.. And personals.. And basically everything else on text battling..

No hate at all.. It just really wasnt vet material from either..

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Voted For: .Wicked One.

Aiight, decent battle from y'all, both came pretty strong

Wicked ya flow was right on point, personals n punches connected, lines were stretched here n there an had some needles words that could have improved the structure, but ya came with alot more creativity within your lines
Good shit

I.E, flow was a little choppy in most places, had some witty stuff, but some of ya rhymes seemed a little forced, like you had ta put themm in there just ta make the personal or punch hit, an that made the effect of ya punch or personal alot less than it could have been, ya feel me?

still a decent battle but wicked got my vote

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Voted For: intensify effect

all beef aside this is an honest vote....ie got this one, i felt

ie-good:liked some of the punches ansl liked the few multies that were in there
bad:some of the punches were played, also a lot of the lines were stretched, so that also threw off the structure...didnt really like the opener or closer
id rate this verse...5.5/10

wicked one-good: to tell the truth, i felt like this was one of your worst battle verses ive seen, you coodve came a lot harder, the only thing i really liked was that your vocab was better than ie's sry mang
bad:i felt like your punches were weak and all played, your structure was pretty badd too, you coodve used multies in their and some more werdplay, sry homie, but this verse wood be rated a 3.5/10 in my bookz..

both-work on ya'lls vocab...the things i thoguht needed the most work was structure and openers and closers

multies-IE
vocab-W1
werdplay-IE
punches-IE
flow-W1

my vote goes to IE

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