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02-12-04, 06:41 PM | #1 | |||||||
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02-13-04, 02:43 AM | #2 | ||||||
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I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..** -----nope Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..*** Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats.. -----nope Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..**** Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief.. -----nope Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..***** Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick.. -----nope He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode.. "Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"****** sorry dude you just have yet to understand what punches are dont take this the wrong way man...all of us at a point were like that too...atleast you have good structure dont explain your punches us readers should understand them easily.... look for tokens thread he will gladly help you |
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02-13-04, 11:42 AM | #3 | ||||||
wanna play doctor????????
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weak attempt at what seems to be a struggle of wordplay
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02-13-04, 11:47 AM | #4 | |||||||
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Thanks..
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02-14-04, 07:32 AM | #5 | ||||||
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Exactly^
Yet he is winning 4-2... Pz... |
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02-14-04, 07:41 AM | #6 | ||||||
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Practice makes perfect..
..Or just bite my lines - You'll win every time doing that.
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02-14-04, 09:00 AM | #7 | ||||||
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^ lol.... you had some decent concepts like the McDonalds, and the first bar wasnt that bad... you just need harder hitting punches and personals that touch on more than what he simply said...
and dont explain all your barz... we aint stupid you know. |
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02-14-04, 12:04 PM | #8 | ||||||||
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When I Called Him A Dog, His Old Name Was Oli Dogg.....I Didnt Explain It, ANd Nobody Knew ANd The First Line About Replayin My Words Is His Crews Motto
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02-15-04, 02:46 AM | #9 | ||||||
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even so...it's still not a decent punch...
i was just saying that you need not explain punches |
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02-15-04, 07:54 AM | #10 | ||||
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but yet he still won..........wak.............
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