check, i got a few other things to write for so like 16 max?

sure no problem with me .

i cant drop yet, no net time. lets make it til 11am or so tomorrow morning since we're both always on then...

haha, if u hadn't post yet i was gonna ask u the same thing cuz i been out all day and i'd rather go out now instead of stayin' in and writin'... so yeah, that's cool.. i might not be able to get it up by 11, depends when i wake up tomorrow, but yea, tomorrow morning is cool

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This is the champ match, how'd I end up fighting a fag?
Who only makes the top punches when he's writing the mag
He reminds me of the Yankees when a dicks on the line
He peeps balls, and Andy Petitt like the pitcher we signed
Your girl strips to Wu-Tang......but most say "Stop!"
Her pussy reeks of 'More fish' than ANY album Ghostface dropped
But hey, he's man enough to show us what he tap and its big
so THATS what Skeletor would look like...with caps and a wig
I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run
Ya weak offense aint shit, aint got no clout..U a clown
I'll D-DT..... and lay his fucking ass out on the ground
BITCH!!!

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238317

Nelson, don't brag on the 1-2, its closed n' downed son
Say Bye to the league...
... actually knocked you out of round 1
U been on RV for ages, I'll land blows on this lame guy
U started such a wave of wackness, u turned the low into high tide
I've had a rough morning, but the worst is ur retarded
Gimme some vodka, cuz less than a fifth of ur verse isn't garbage
Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording
U claim to get ass? Nah, this gay whore has been lying
Ur morning wood could convince me the rainforest isn't dying
Ur shit was played years ago n' it hurts to say this dude
But ur so outdated, even fuckin' nerds get more play than u

This is the champ match, how'd I end up fighting a fag?
Who only makes the top punches when he's writing the mag
SIMPLE WORDING, BUT THE PERSONAL IS THERE AND MAKES THE PUNCH THAT MUCH MORE EFFECTIVE.
He reminds me of the Yankees when a dicks on the line
He peeps balls, and Andy Petitt like the pitcher we signed
LMAO! THIS MADE ME LAUGH, BUT STILL... ITS A GAY PUNCH.
Your girl strips to Wu-Tang......but most say "Stop!"
Her pussy reeks of 'More fish' than ANY album Ghostface dropped
NAH, I DIDN'T LIKE THIS. "SMELLY PUSSY" LINES ARE PLAYED TO FUCK.
But hey, he's man enough to show us what he tap and its big
so THATS what Skeletor would look like...with caps and a wig
LMFAO!! THIS IS THE FUNNIEST BAR I'VE SEEN THIS WEEK... WELL, AFTER THAT 12.PZ LINE FROM METS ANYWAY.
I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run
PERSONAL WAS THERE, WORDING COULD BE BETTER THOUGH.
Ya weak offense aint shit, aint got no clout..U a clown
I'll D-DT..... and lay his fucking ass out on the ground
AS A WRESTLING FAN, I CAN APPRECIATE THIS LINE MORE. IT WAS A DECENT WAY TO FINISH A VERSE, AND ALTHOUGH IT MAY HAVE BEEN DONE, I AIN'T SEEN A DDT NAMEPLAY ON TRUS BEFORE SO PROPS ON IT.


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Nelson, don't brag on the 1-2, its closed n' downed son
Say Bye to the league...
... actually knocked you out of round 1
LMFAO!! FUCKING DAMN RIGHT!! THIS WAS FUCKING CLASSIC!!
U been on RV for ages, I'll land blows on this lame guy
U started such a wave of wackness, u turned the low into high tide
I'VE SEEN THIS CONCEPT BEFORE A FEW TIMES, AND THIS WASN'T THE BEST FLIP I'VE SEEN ON IT.
I've had a rough morning, but the worst is ur retarded
Gimme some vodka, cuz less than a fifth of ur verse isn't garbage
THIS WAS PRETTY COOL, I LIKED THE CONCEPT AND IT WAS WORDED WELL.
Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording
I'VE SEEN IT BEFORE, AND HONESTLY, TAV'S WORDING IS DECENT.
U claim to get ass? Nah, this gay whore has been lying
Ur morning wood could convince me the rainforest isn't dying
ITS BEEN FLIPPED BEFORE, BUT THIS WAS OK.
Ur shit was played years ago n' it hurts to say this dude
But ur so outdated, even fuckin' nerds get more play than u
THIS WAS OK, AGAIN THOUGH, I'VE SEEN IT FLIPPED BEFORE.



THIS WAS A NICE BATTLE. TWO DECENT BATTLERS GOING AT IT, BUT I FELT BOTH FELL SHORT OF THEIR REAL POTENTIAL. ANDY HAD THE LINE OF THE BATTLE WITH HIS OPENER, THAT SHIT HAD ME FALLING OFF MY SEAT IN STITCHES. HIS VODKA LINE WAS SWEET TO. BUT OTHER THAN THOSE TWO BARS, THE REST WERE JUST FLIPS ON OLD CONCEPTS. AND I KNOW, MOST VERSES WILL BE LIKE THAT, BUT YOU'VE GOT TO COME REAL FRESH AND CREATIVE WITH THE FLIP. I THINK ANDY JUST DIDN'T REALLY FEEL UP TO MAKING THIS BATTLE A CLASSIC THIS WEEK.
NELSON HAD THE MODERATOR AND LEAGUE PERSONALS. BOTH WERE DECENT IN THEIR OWN RIGHT, BUT COULD'VE BEEN BETTER. HE HAD THE DDT NAMEPLAY WHICH I THOUGHT WAS FRESH AND COOL. BUT MOSTLY, THE SKELETOR LINE IS WHAT EDGED HIM THIS BATTLE IN MY OPINION.

V/ - N.TAVAREZ

WHAT THE FUCK AT ANOTHER VOTE MIMICKING NELSON!!

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I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run

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Nelson, don't brag on the 1-2, its closed n' downed son
Say Bye to the league...
... actually knocked you out of round 1
Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording

neither verse was that great, but neither were that weak either. i think tavarez was more personal, which i liked. i felt he had trouble executing alot of his punches though, or atleast forced them somewhat. dth, your opener had me thinking you were going to take this for sure, but you never really had anything harsh again until the 'tie up the line', which i've seen before. you had a couple flipped concepts, so for orginality ill vote - tavarez.

This is the champ match, how'd I end up fighting a fag?
Who only makes the top punches when he's writing the mag
I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run

vs

Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording

Seemed very rushed on both sides. Specially DTH, seemed like he had writers block or something. Tavarez came aight, those 2 personals both hit hard. DTH's quotable was aight, the rest of his verse I wasn't feeling though. Basically, Tavarez was better all round and got it with a more consistent and tighter verse.

v/ N.Tavarez

This is the champ match, how'd I end up fighting a fag?
Who only makes the top punches when he's writing the mag
He reminds me of the Yankees when a dicks on the line
He peeps balls, and Andy Petitt like the pitcher we signed
I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run
^ ^ALL OF THOSE WERE "OUCH" TYPE SHIT


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U been on RV for ages, I'll land blows on this lame guy
U started such a wave of wackness, u turned the low into high tide
^ ^GOOD PUNCH
Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording
^ ^DECENT SHOT AT HIM


vote N Tav

He came more aggressive with personal shots where as Trus seem like all he said in return was Tav's Played and he garbage but really didn't go for the juggular personal wise which I'm suprised cause he's normally pretty good at that. The Rainforest thing sounded a lil gay but the other lines I Quoted were good tho but I think the rest of Tav's verse turned out a lil better than the rest of Trus's.

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This is the champ match, how'd I end up fighting a fag?
Who only makes the top punches when he's writing the mag
He reminds me of the Yankees when a dicks on the line
He peeps balls, and Andy Petitt like the pitcher we signed
But hey, he's man enough to show us what he tap and its big
so THATS what Skeletor would look like...with caps and a wig
I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run

vs

Nelson, don't brag on the 1-2, its closed n' downed son
Say Bye to the league...
... actually knocked you out of round 1
Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording

DT came ok in this battle but it seems like he didn't consentrate which is understandable from the shit he does but still....He droped some good shit like his opener n the other bar that I quoted though it wasn't worded as good as it could have been. N. Tav came at him more consistantly in this one. Not too very hard hitting shots but more consistant which is important.

V/ N. Tav

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

This is the champ match, how'd I end up fighting a fag?
Who only makes the top punches when he's writing the mag
But hey, he's man enough to show us what he tap and its big
so THATS what Skeletor would look like...with caps and a wig
I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run

vs.


Nelson, don't brag on the 1-2, its closed n' downed son
Say Bye to the league...
... actually knocked you out of round 1
U been on RV for ages, I'll land blows on this lame guy
U started such a wave of wackness, u turned the low into high tide
Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording



Close Champ match. N. Tav had the better personals that hit hard, but D.T.H had more creative punches. This was tied in quotables and I wouldn't know how to vote on this if it wasn't for some wording issues that I think DaTrus had. Or perhaps I liked N. Tav's wording better. Either way I think that the wording took it for N. Tav's, that's why he gets my vote.


V/ N. Tavarez

N.Taverez:
This is the champ match, how'd I end up fighting a fag?
Who only makes the top punches when he's writing the mag
Your girl strips to Wu-Tang......but most say "Stop!"
Her pussy reeks of 'More fish' than ANY album Ghostface dropped
But hey, he's man enough to show us what he tap and its big
so THATS what Skeletor would look like...with caps and a wig
I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run

vs.

DaTrusHurtz:
Nelson, don't brag on the 1-2, its closed n' downed son
Say Bye to the league...
... actually knocked you out of round 1
U been on RV for ages, I'll land blows on this lame guy
U started such a wave of wackness, u turned the low into high tide
Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording

decent battle.. N.Tav had the overall better verse, more personals, and harder-hittin' punches. The first bar from DaTrus, I thought was feedin' off some of Tav's bars. I got N.Tav taking this

vote - N.Taverez