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Old 02-03-07, 06:42 PM   #121
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^^^ Look you aint nice at all, So go ahead an Run so rockets I'll be on ya
ya flow so shitty ......... ya very own asshole i'll diss-own-ya
you been here far to long and havent gain a grain of talent
your skill's is outdated in other words ya flow aint vaild
lets handle it like real men, spit shells till ya body in a world wind
you wouldnt have an advantage if you use a verse from murlyn
*wizord*
i sell rocks the size of my muscle curlyen, ya flow "bear"ly take flight like "tail spin" *cartoon*
he'll win.... HA! NEVER!, cuz he'll keep trying to fuck with me like a Male Sin
let me get the automatic, and cuz traffic cuz this here is drastic
start blastin the plastic, till he see the light flash kid
i'll leave you in a box for a min like a quick bid
cut you with the ox's while we slap box's and feed ya limb to ya kid mother fuckah!!

I AINT DONE I WANT IN THIS BITCH STOP REFUSEING ME........


i refuse to quit till my name in the rank'in and ya start to get use to it
im a dead man walking more like talking to you pricks who use to flip
packs of the crack.... oz of the weed... an bottles of liquer
my automatic agenst your revovler... HA bitch.... lets see who'll get shot quicker
some killahs move with the violence, i move with the silence
and cruse throu ur island with the uz and shot throu youer eye lid
im the new kid who stylen, so get use to the wilding cuz im not having it
far pass ya peak by the miles, i'll orgenize crime for the paper like a fileing cabenit
So keep coming with that gimmic fool
and have these sheels dive in ya chest like a swimming pool
put you in omarion ice box so you can be living cool
dont rep blood either fam, cuz u aint eat'in u'll be giving food
an i gotta fess, i been throu alot of mess
but i done bought payless shoes that make ya skills worth alotta less
poke ya back till it look like you got a chest, but i gotta flex
cuz if i aint drop'in the bomb, then its like angie martinez without a flex
you a lock'it with a crest, a chain without the links
a man with no brain who like to think, a blind fuck who gotta blink
a cat who wanna bark, a tropical island without a shark
a faget with a pussy, a bitch with balls, the body that got outline an charkd
so keep runing ya mouth about ransum...damn your a bumb
you a armless man cuz hes hits never land-son, im so hot i could buy land on the Sun
you fail bro, in this fight im hitless,
bet u can relate since u'll never sell-bro
so keep trying, an you'll be lyin on the track like a rail-rode........
MOTHER FUCKAH....



LET ME IN THIS LEAGUE




whats really good??????



WELL CAN I GET IN THIS???
NOT GOOD ENOUGH?
OR I DONT HAVE ENOUGH DICK RYDERS?
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Old 02-03-07, 07:00 PM   #122
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This is the last week of the LBL.

That is why you can't get in this, because next week.. THIS, won't exist anymore.
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Old 02-03-07, 07:18 PM   #123
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P.S. - Ransum, whilst you may be better than Top-Notch, Real_Talk and all them other faggots... you need some SERIOUS ELEVATION before you even get considered for this league... if it was still running.

The GBA is replacing it, and you will not be getting into that I can assure you. Not until you FUCKING ELEVATE. I'm sick of all you people thinking you are the shit and not taking criticism... I am officially no longer being nice about it. You are all fucking garbage.

ARRRGGGHHHHH!!!!!
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Old 02-04-07, 10:26 AM   #124
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^^ hahaha nick i know i need to elevate i never said i was the best or even said that im better then you but im not trash and im not on here for friends or anything this is just to take up my spare time while just trying to elevate and i will try for any battle leauge u guys have and it dont matter to me if i make it or not so HA!

P.S you honestly lost that match with topnotch thou........
and that wordplay was mad forced....
u should take my criticism to make you wanna drop better not to talk shit back....
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Old 02-04-07, 01:02 PM   #125
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My verse took 5 minutes, stuff off the top of my head (THAT DIDN'T GO AT NO 1 PERSON CAUSE SINGLING OUT SOMEBODY IS COMPLETLY DIFFERENT)on the spot cause I aint see nobody spit nothing special. I've seen freestyles be better than some cats that took they time and carefully wrote shit so I aint trippin. I aint gont waste nothing I could use in a real battle in this thread. If niggaz think I'm 2004 or whatever then set a thread up and get at me fucka.
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Old 02-04-07, 01:46 PM   #126
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yo TEF, yo shit was hot on da sneak yo. aye, join up on Letsbeef.com where "'04" talent gets u recognition. trust me yo, yo shit was hot, im tellin u if u get on letsbeef u'll wreck without a doubt. once u get on letsbeef look up Hot_Stylez iight? got a crew spot for u 2. 1
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Old 02-04-07, 01:48 PM   #127
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same thing for u Ransum. people'll actually b like oh shit off yo verses on letsbeef. jump on hoe n u'll get real competition and real exposure...real talk yo. same thing for u, get on dat bitch n drop me a message on my page, my name on der is Hot_Stylez and i got a spot fo ya.
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Old 02-04-07, 05:10 PM   #128
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Ransum and TEF are both TOO GOOD for your site.

But, if they want to join up, more power to them.

I'm done with this argument.
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Old 02-04-07, 05:16 PM   #129
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I will actually say one more thing though to you people from letsbeef. This argument was pointless and so it breaks down like this... REAL CRITICISM!


If you ask a lot of strictly text battlers, they will tell you the same thing. Your text verses use the "Audio-Style". That used to be acceptable back in 2004. This is why I call your style the 2004 Style. You are writing a text verse based on how you would drop on a mic. No doubt, if we was dropping on a mic and you put your shit down and I put a text-style verse down I would get laughed at and owned to shit.

Text battling has evolved in the past 3 years into a style of its own, breaking away from the audio-esque text verses. Whilst some sites still deem an audio text verse acceptable and think it is dope, sites like RapVerse, RapBattles, RapMusic, ProjectRhyme, B-Boys, BragginWrites.... they don't.

AUDIO and TEXT are two completely different styles. Text is all about wording, concepts, punches/personals. Obviously, multi rhyming becomes a factor because if you have it with fresh punches and dope wordplay you'll have an even better verse. It also increases your flow and shit. But, flow and multies fall below the main aspects of a text verse.

A text verse with dope wordplay and punches but an average flow and rhyme scheme will beat out a text verse with a dope flow and multi rhyme scheme but played wordplay and shitty ass punches.

You have your style, it is still strong on your site so I can't blame you I guess for thinking it is the shit, because it is on YOUR site. But on this site, Text and Audio are separate and do not blend in any way, thus, your style on this site will be frowned upon by most.
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Old 02-05-07, 10:45 AM   #130
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i could care less about this letsbeef vs RV beef, as long as dudes dont pull me in it like real talk mentioning my name in that other thread
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Old 02-12-07, 03:52 AM   #131
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Old 02-14-07, 08:47 AM   #132
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