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Check in by: 04-14-05 at 03:02 PM

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Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 02:33 PM.

Yung Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 02:41 PM.

your writtens are gonna be prewrittens ya brain is missin
I don't think ya should be here cuz you an't gonna be winnin
i crush ya bars Retareded fool you always fail to impress
leave this battle cuz your mums calling u for some titty sex
ya don't even know dat alphabet your a fuckin loser
he gets scared when i spit cuz u know im'a abuse yer
your a microphone abuser your punches are ur pretection
but my raps snap your back and leave ya wid infections
this guys a dummy i'll kick ur stummach your a disgrace
your a dyslexic you prob can't even tie ur own shoe lace
your not gonna spit harder how can u consider yaself an artist
im the smartist my flows will kill ya in an instand you retardist
im ripping this fool stop skipping school your rap stinks
i murder everything you think your the weakest link
so step out of line your a faggot your just a coward
when you make punchlines dey bounce off me like flowers
stupid retard you know my bars stick into leaving you shatterd
just like your gf when i had the fuckin bitch battered
you an't a rapper your just a dick you can't speak
everyone knows ur weak cuz u stand out like a freak
your just to damn basic face it your need to wake up
you've just gave up im about to blow this fake up
your a loose cannon why the hell are you still breathin
nobody likes ya man after this you really should be leavin
young wun ya sound like ur from hong kong you fag
i bet you live in a fuckin gutter wid a binliner bag
your rappings wack my skill is just plain better den yours
your the whore of rap when ya spit you don't get an aplause

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g'luck kiddo...

Shuttup! AND STAY QUIET, bitch, FUCK A STAGE RIOT,
Ill make you 'stay away from the beef' LIKE a SUBWAY DIET!
DUCK when I BLAZE PILOTS cuz my GATS BLASTIN KIDS,
My 'delivery is so perfect' my 'birth' was CONTRACTIONLESS!
You cant HANDLE MY SCRIPTURE so Ima DISMANTLE YA FIGURE,
Dominate? Ima destroy ya crew in 1 Shot like a FAMILY PICTURE!
So Ima STAB U WIT KNIVES until it becomes a CAPITOL CRIME,
Bustin ya 'seed in the ground' is the only way u 'cum-up wit NATURAL RHYMES!' (LMFAO)


--Heatin Up--

Im somethin you needa get USED TO or get BRUISED BLUE,
Shiit, the 'River' has more 'Natural Flow' than YOU DO!
You couldnt elevate wit a MAGICAL CARPET, FAG GO N' PARK IT,
Before I smack ya 'body backwards' until ya TRAPPED IN YA CARCASS!
Kid, YOULL GET FUCKED, LITERALLY when I PICK UP AGILITY,
The ONLY thing your Natural At is ya DICK SUCKIN ABILITY!

--FINISH HIM!!--

You gotta GUN & A KNIFE while I got my TONGUE IN YA WIFE, I DIP NUNS CUNTS IN ICE & CUM IN YA EYE-
But my Shells 'Make ya Chest Sprint to the Floor' and 'Heart RUN FOR ITS LIFE!' (T-K-FUCKIN-O!)
effect fuck ya self dilldo im so strong i could kill you by beaten you with a pillow

upping for votes..................................

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Voted For: Yung Wun

effect u spittin 2 many lines fam lol.....i had d askimp thru all dat shit i couldn't read da whole thing shit hurtin my eyes...

opener-yung takes dis....dat was a good punch and effect ur's was 2 basic

structure-umm a tie i could both ya'll shit well

punchlines-yung....he had some real creative and cleva shit in his verse...effect i didn't any hott punches from u fam real talk no hate

multis-yung...he had 1 almost every line..effect u had nun

personals-nun from both ya didn't even say each other's name

finisher-yung....dat pillow shit was funny...effect ur's was decent i aint gon lie but it wasn't betta than his

v/yung wun

RTF..LINKS IN MY SIG...OR CHECK 1 OF MY BATTLES ON DA FRONTLINES

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

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Voted For: Yung Wun

Young Wun took this. structure was kinda shitty, but i was feelin this drop big time. punches hit real hard, and were worded good. i didnt really see any hard personals, but i was feelin young wuns verse more. one sided battle to me. I like tha creativite in this one. and you also had more consistency. v/yw

this verse won because it had a lot more lines and punchlines both battles were pretty close though...

lol at ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ this upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin