check.

10, maybe more.

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i need a slight extension. so ill edit my verse here as soon as it is finished.

i tried searchin one his verses, idk if theres a possible way to link shit
but Rell wont cry over spilled milk - the nigga'll drop down and DRINK IT!
kids stupid, i mean honestly... ur not bad, but u'll fall
cuz im just lookin for a quick buck... to add on my wall
so fuck this cunt, almost errybody here would make Rell bend and take it
cuz its wrong to air ur dirty laundry, but we dont want to see him naked
watch, ill beat you so groggy ur ass'll need skull attached glasses
n' i'd tell you to hold your horses, but i think YOUR ALL JACK-ASSES!
wtf with the weak shit? get outta here, i mean god...u act ten
cuz its obvious we're on the same page, that u dropped WACK in
i rushed every piece of this verse, and u bit, so it hurts us - ur spoiled
but this hillbilly thinks he has money in the bank, where he searches for oil

(wonders how many will get the last punch)

Son, your not gonna win...you got better Stakes in Lotto.
Your Structures so Totaled...
Insurance Companies are still asking for the Make and Model.
LMAO^
I Don'tKnowYou, Don'tLikeYou, You Milky bitch your spoiled.
If this Trailer Park Thug says his Hood is Poppin...He's just Low on Oil.

vs

watch, ill beat you so groggy ur ass'll need skull attached glasses
n' i'd tell you to hold your horses, but i think YOUR ALL JACK-ASSES!
so fuck this cunt, almost errybody here would make Rell bend and take it
cuz its wrong to air ur dirty laundry, but we dont want to see him naked


OKAY IM GONNA BREAK THIS DOWN A LITTLE FURTHER FOR DONTKNOWME'S SAKE, THOSE TWO I QUOTED WERE PRETTY GOOD PUNCHES, THE PROBLEM IS, YOUR VERSE WAS LITTERED WITH CLICHE PUNCHLINES, WHICH ARENT AS SOLID AS THEY USED TO BE.....REASON WHY? NEARLY ANYBODY WHO READS TEXT WILL TELL YOU THEY'VE SEEN THESE CONCEPTS ALL BEFORE
THE SPILLED MILK, SAME PAGE, HOLD YOUR HORSES AND DIRTY LAUNDRY ONE AT LEAST, YOU GOTTA MAKE YOUR VERSE MORE PERSONAL TOWARDS HIM AS A TEXTCEE, AND MIX IT UP A BIT MORE, PEOPLE LIKE SPITACULAR OVER AT RB HAVE RENDERED CLICHES UNDOABLE BY OVERDOING IT FOR YEARS, SO ITS NOT ALL YOUR FAULT LMAO
SO RELL YOU CAME PRETTY RUSTY OR YOU JUST DIDNT CARE, IVE DEF SEEN YOU COME HARDER BUT I WONT HOLD IT AGAINST YOU AS YOU'VE JUST SIGNED BACK IN

GOOD SHIT BOTH, DONTKNOWME IM INTERESTED TO SEE WHAT YOU POST NEXT WEEK CUZ YOUR AN ALIAS I CAN TELL BUT THIS WEEK SO RELL CAME BETTER OVERAL AND FRESHER CONCEPT WISE
V/ SO RELL

BOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! @ YOU FLIPPING MY YEAR OLD CONCEPTS!!


Anyway... past that...

Son, your not gonna win...you got better Stakes in Lotto.
Your Structures so Totaled...
Insurance Companies are still asking for the Make and Model.
I Don'tKnowYou, Don'tLikeYou, You Milky bitch your spoiled.
If this Trailer Park Thug says his Hood is Poppin...He's just Low on Oil.


VS.


watch, ill beat you so groggy ur ass'll need skull attached glasses
n' i'd tell you to hold your horses, but i think YOUR ALL JACK-ASSES!
so fuck this cunt, almost errybody here would make Rell bend and take it
cuz its wrong to air ur dirty laundry, but we dont want to see him naked
i rushed every piece of this verse, and u bit, so it hurts us - ur spoiled
but this hillbilly thinks he has money in the bank, where he searches for oil



YEAH, THIS BATTLE WASN'T TOO BAD. ONCE I GOT PAST THE FACT THAT SO.RELL FLIPPED ONE OF MY OLD, OLD CONCEPTS, I THOUGHT HIS VERSE WAS COOL. HE ONLY HAD THOSE COUPLE OF BARS THAT WERE QUOTABLE. THE STRUCTURE LINE WAS DOPENESS AND THE TRAILER PARK/OIL LINE WAS PRETTY SWEET TO. DON'TKNOW ME JUST CAME THAT LITTLE BIT BETTER. NELSON IS CORRECT ABOUT THE CLICHE PUNCHES, BUT HE STILL HAD AN OK VERSE. AND YES, I GET THE CLOSER WITH THE DIGGING FOR OIL LIKE A FUCKING HILLBILLY CLAMPETT SHIT. THAT WAS A DECENT FLIP ON THE MONEY IN THE BANK CONCEPT.

V/ - DON'TKNOWME


^ WOW, MY VOTE LOOKS LIKE NELSON'S.

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1-1.

thanks for the explanations, both are greatly appreciated as well as respected.

Son, your not gonna win...you got better Stakes in Lotto.
Your Structures so Totaled...
Insurance Companies are still asking for the Make and Model
End this piece of shit before he can even start in gear.
He claims he's new to RV, but he's been Living in Trailer Parks for Years.
I Don'tKnowYou, Don'tLikeYou, You Milky bitch your spoiled.
If this Trailer Park Thug says his Hood is Poppin...He's just Low on Oil.

vs

so fuck this cunt, almost errybody here would make Rell bend and take it
cuz its wrong to air ur dirty laundry, but we dont want to see him naked
wtf with the weak shit? get outta here, i mean god...u act ten
cuz its obvious we're on the same page, that u dropped WACK in


Decent battle here. So Rell didn't come as hard as Ive seen him in the past but he had some good lines. The trailor lines always make me laugh no matter how old they got or how many time Ive seen it. Ofcourse I realise it may have been flipped or it may have just been coincidance...I gaurantee he wouldn't be the first or last to do a RV = Trailor home line...shit...I might do one next week for the fuck of it lol jk. anyways...DKM came cool too. Not too many quotables though to my liking but still had a good verse. The last bar that I quoted was the line of the battle and he deffinetly would have gotten my vote if only he had like 2 more bars like this one. Str8 battle.

V/ So Rell

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Son, your not gonna win...you got better Stakes in Lotto.
Your Structures so Totaled...
Insurance Companies are still asking for the Make and Model.


vs.


i tried searchin one his verses, idk if theres a possible way to link shit
but Rell wont cry over spilled milk - the nigga'll drop down and DRINK IT!
kids stupid, i mean honestly... ur not bad, but u'll fall
cuz im just lookin for a quick buck... to add on my wall
(would have been dope with a better set-up)
wtf with the weak shit? get outta here, i mean god...u act ten
cuz its obvious we're on the same page, that u dropped WACK in



Yea. To me this was one-sided. Don'tKnowMe had some dope lines and some decent ones, while I found So Rell had some concepts but they were all executed badly pretty much. Don'tKnowMe simply took this with a better verse and more quotables. That's why he gets my vote.


V/ Don'tKnowMe

2-2.

dope battle Rell.

my vote
"Son, your not gonna win...you got better Stakes in Lotto.
Your Structures so Totaled...
Insurance Companies are still asking for the Make and Model.
If you wan't an Advance, pay the price you have to wait.
Me vs. Him? He's not even a Handful like when he tries to Masterbate"

dont no u dont want 2, basic just a load of filler that rhymes

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^ he isnt in the league, and that vote sucked dick lol.

still 2-2.

He doesn't have to be in the league to vote but that vote does suck though man.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

lol, for real though.

but why is there no rule to league voting? i mean, anybody can get dickriders from anywhere to register and vote for them weekly. or from around the site. this is only my second week here, so idk how bad the dr's are, or if there is a problem with them at all... but that seems like a rule that should be applied as atleast a precaution.