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Checknizzle.


Whoever drops first.

Everything ya writes wack,Marksmen even slaughtered this jerk
if all good things come to an end..Closers shouldnt be apart of ya verse
Niggas know ya shit gon be garbage,but i dont mean to spoil it
but from §how voters expect to seymour ass den Principle Skinners toilet
your nothing but a faggot, homo my bars'll leave ya tore quick
cuz behind every good man theres a woman...and yours has a horse dick
murders my sport bitch, plus im Marks lawer check his last bout
where he quickly "excercised his rights"and KNOCKED YOUR ASS OUT!
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Its the last week of the LBL..i signed up late in history i have no place
but skill is on a visual display and yet ya still have nothing to show,case

SMH. Easy faggot.


That loss last week was bull, but I’m not angry in the least,
Because I know this week you’ll open up to me…
…and I’ll have your organs for a feast.
Your old name was more fitting, it incorporated your life in the process,
You were 13th in the top 10 list, the poor house and the unemployment office.
But the apostle part was totally off, any relevance was proven fiction,
In fact, if Jesus met your stupid ass he would have volunteered for the crucifixion.
Leave you shaking in your boots and exercising to see perks,
So I’ll make you sweat-shop…like where the rest of your family works.
How many played lines can you drop, you’re such a disgrace,
Shit son, quickly get your caliber up…and shoot yourself in the face.

Ok..

Well I got Bishop taking this. Showcase I don't know why you dropped all those violence lines and filler shit, it really took away from your verse. You ned punches and concepts man, you pretty much gave this battle up.

Bishops' shit wasn't top notch either, but with Showcase dropping the way he did, Bishop really didn't have competition. No real personals with either verse that were hard hitting, but Bishop atleast had some wordplay, creativity, and decent concepts through his verse.

Favorite punch from each contender:

Bishop:
"murders my sport bitch, plus im Marks lawer check his last bout
where he quickly "excercised his rights"and KNOCKED YOUR ASS OUT!"

Showcase:
"Leave you shaking in your boots and exercising to see perks,
So I’ll make you sweat-shop…like where the rest of your family works."

Vote - Bishop

bishop:
Everything ya writes wack,Marksmen even slaughtered this jerk
if all good things come to an end..Closers shouldnt be apart of ya verse
murders my sport bitch, plus im Marks lawer check his last bout
where he quickly "excercised his rights"and KNOCKED YOUR ASS OUT!

showcase:
But the apostle part was totally off, any relevance was proven fiction,
In fact, if Jesus met your stupid ass he would have volunteered for the crucifixion.
Leave you shaking in your boots and exercising to see perks,
So I’ll make you sweat-shop…like where the rest of your family works.


weak battle.. Showcases verse was more consistant and he had slighlty better quotables, Bishops lines besides his quotables werent that good

vote-showcase

Everything ya writes wack,Marksmen even slaughtered this jerk
if all good things come to an end..Closers shouldnt be apart of ya verse
GOOD
murders my sport bitch, plus im Marks lawer check his last bout
where he quickly "excercised his rights"and KNOCKED YOUR ASS OUT!
NICE PERSONAL JAB



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Leave you shaking in your boots and exercising to see perks,
So I’ll make you sweat-shop…like where the rest of your family works.
LOL


VOTE: BISHOP

I almost quoted Showcases closer to make the quotes a tie but because I almost quoted Bishops closer too, Show still woulda lost by a quote but the way it stands now...Bishop has 2 to Show's 1. The quotes that I put and the 2 Honorable mentions that werent quite good e-nuff for the quotes(the closers) were the only things worth reading so Bishop did a lil bit more to get it.

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bishop took this one. show had nothing impressive and at least bishop had a coherent verse, keeping the rhyme scheme for two bars which doesn't happen much here. not an inceredibly surprising win, but yeah...

this is a pretty good battle

show i thought you had a stretched flow man, which i can't handle

v-bishop

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Isn't he the 13th apostle or something?? 2 of my punches were based on that. And if none of you can follow that, you are at a new degree of stupidity.

^Got that, but the unemployment office and shit was what ruined it...you had a good direction but the ender messed it up..I feel that if you word your shit better that you'll become a threat to vets around here. You have the concepts down but you need to become a little more complex and you'll do good..

ROFL at you contradicting yourself.

If you read it right I said you need punches AND concepts, meaning both together..

You're missing the punches..

So next time instead of being a dickhead, why don't you take progressive criticism and do something with it..

LOL at you thinking I'm being a dickhead. Obviously you haven't had anyone ridicule you for your mistakes before, tisk tisk tisk. LMAO, it doesn't really matter to me.