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Old 03-23-06, 07:48 AM   #1
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HnS - What Da Hood Made Me

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holla at the kid this some shit me and my boy was fuckin around wit ...we choppin and screwin and shit for the hell of it...lol peep this shit its ill my niggaz Ez...

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Old 03-24-06, 10:25 AM   #2
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i like the intro into the beat

You sound like a lotta cats on this site voice wise, it doesn't stand out much

Flow was on point...I like the rhyming and delivery fit this beat

Lyrics fit this type of track...

Hook is kinda busy...Screwed...sounds alright...

2nd verse...heavier voice on track...flow is good

Solid drop

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Old 03-24-06, 08:49 PM   #3
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Chopped and screwed me? Took me for a loop

Came in real nice on the slide and good pacin on the flow. Way to ride the beat. The lyrics were on point, can't really say much more than that.

The second verse, got rough on the flow early in the verse, especially compared to the first verse. Lyrics weren't bad and what you'd expect from a song called "what the hood made me"

Third verse sounds like a young jeezy type, real whispy. Lyrics were okay, but honestly, the verse was forgettable

Fouth, still like that slow down on the transition, came in nice and made for a nice pair of 8s to share the 16. Nothin stellar lyrically, like none of the lines stood out as new type stuff, but it's marketable. It'd get on the radio.
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Old 03-24-06, 10:18 PM   #4
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too tired to leave real feed, lol...so yea here is some vague shit...overall i was definitly feelin this trakk, the way ya mixed it and everything, this was the first thing ive heard from you and yea your shit is real nice....keep it up

btw cood you rtf on either of these

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224986

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224985

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Old 03-24-06, 11:04 PM   #5
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wooooo... shizz is dope man... i like this one better than bx... good flow... like ya voice good delivery... HOOK IS ILL... i like this track alot good shit 9/10
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Old 03-25-06, 09:47 AM   #6
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Listening....beat is hot...im liking how u come in....real nice effect on ya voice..you got a dope flow...def a huge improvement since tha older days...when i wud be listenin to ya joints like i see no light still dope..but this shows how much u got better...lyrics are hot...flow is hot...hook is hot...fuck u pay me..haha str8 up my nigga...the other duke...flow is kool falls off a few times..his voice is gutta...lyrics are nice...but ya pronounciation is a lil off but ure flow is gets much better...I like the switch ups..hot joint yall 1.

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Old 03-25-06, 10:06 AM   #7
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damn this is tite as hell, i heard this beat b4 n i thought nobody would b able to work it nyce but u proved me wrong. u are one of tha few who can spit dope w/ out having to overdub all tha time... tha hook is kinda tite. i like tha second verse fasho this dude is gotten waaaaaayy better i used to hate his flow but now he's fuckin crazy man.. make ya vomit ya lunch up lol... 3rd verse flow kicks in nycely voice has matured fasho u got a new level of confidence goin on. i like how u chop n screw it wen u switch off. on sum mike jones shit lol... cept good
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Old 03-25-06, 04:48 PM   #8
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aight the beat is str8 flow and delivery are solid, the hook is catchy, quality is str8, over-all nice ish keep it up.

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Old 03-25-06, 05:55 PM   #9
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Damn, this comes in sounding mad professionial. The flow is illy yo. About damn time. I really like the feel of this track. The chorus is just a LITTLE too crowded and shit, but other then that, it's good. I don't like how the second verse comes is screwed. =/ The second guy is meh, nothing special, but not bad. The flow is whats not gettin it for me I think. Overall, good job.
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