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Old 11-13-03, 08:26 PM   #1
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"Blasphemy" by me,thoughtz.. sick ass beat

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yes yall.. i did come from hip hop dialect.. its a little boring there.. i like this site a lil better even though i just joined but its obvious ima get more feedback n shit here... and i have a feelign niggas aint gunan be grimey really so im saying watup all hope ya welcome me n shit.. for now peep my beatz this seems to be a good site to advertise them all. you know..

"Blasphemy" Sick ass beat please peep

hit me up on Aim on crackedthoughtz or on diasjoel1256 on aol to have a custom made beat for you.. dont worry im pretty cheap just hit me up ill discuss prices with you n shit

good looking and i hope ya welcome me all

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Old 12-12-03, 04:18 PM   #2
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its good, might try aligning the beat a lil better, also mix it up a lil more. and use better quality sounds
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Old 12-12-03, 06:00 PM   #3
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i think the meldoy is too quick for the drumline and way too loud..nice drumline tho..work on it abit more
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Old 12-16-03, 06:38 PM   #4
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dont like the way its chopped...it could be put together better than that...getting repetitive...needs a break @ the 4 bar, or the 8th...or both...hype sounding...just needs more. this chorus...if thats it...repetitive as well...really hype sounding...it just needs some more work.

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