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Old 06-03-07, 06:58 PM   #1
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Round 4: Ransum 2-1 .vs Antonio Banderas 0-0

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Battles up Sunday
House Rules 10-14 lines
Verses Due Friday.
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Old 06-03-07, 07:37 PM   #2
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yup yup...
good luck....

last battle i went weak cuz i drop late so it was only right i let dude win...

but this time i know you preety decent... so i wont go ez on you dunny...

good luck...
 
Old 06-03-07, 07:56 PM   #3
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checkin in................................................ .................................................. ........................
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Old 06-03-07, 08:01 PM   #4
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you wanna drop now since im feeling kinda drunk and nice...
we can drop in like 30 to 40 min whats good??

i'll pm k.stubbs to make it offical for us to drop with-in the hour??

whats really good?

lets get it ova with now insted of waiting...
 
Old 06-07-07, 05:08 PM   #5
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time to shyne on this bitch....


i ask this bitch to drop early.. but the fag ran and hind....
so exspect ran to stop ya flow.. like ya crash'ing ya ryde....
If you have an album dont mention it...believe its a waste....
the only other person seein it.... is you and the reflection in the CD case....
paused.. ''sharpining blade''..cut ur balls ur no man u serve no cause....
it was raw for your life to "permanently stop period"... like Menopause....
make sure no justice...when i kill you an moms lawya....
beating you is the TRUTH..
i'll show u more 'Sharp Points' then swords through Inigo Montoya...
i'll drop your 'candy ass' like im 'taste'in sum nerds'.. hommie you justa waste'in my words...
Antonio Banderas Whole Style's Ass!...like he been Tastin His Turds...
was praying for a no-show... well now im here for deploy...
he like crabs.. just standing there holding my sack lika grocery boy...
you a pussy wit no fans... Cat in all honesty... i can see dat you scared..
Antonio Banderas couldn't "Rock the Crowd"...
for his fans-sake, if his fan-base endorsed in "Rockin-Chairs".... EZ....
mother fuckah...

GET AT ME.... KIDDO....
 
Old 06-07-07, 05:56 PM   #6
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I was gonna wait til tomorrow, but I'll key something..

GL homie
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Old 06-07-07, 06:17 PM   #7
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it his tornequeit pressured, an my offensives too much an onslaught
but his best offense is his defense, and its bout to get dropped



dude's as weak as they come, cant believe the fleets that u won
I run this forum and this block, bitch, at least u ran some
& that weapons of war are played, but i aint giving a fuck see
cuz U put bullets in the air, and claim to be shooting the breeze
yeah ur speech is deadly, & u've barked up the wrong tree,
if your knocking out the competition, its cause you need listerine
know oppurtunity knocks, u aint seeing me, never been dope
and I'll though homour, U Nice, but it'll be a blind joke
& I know my verse is wak, so I'll take you to dinner date
Cuz this obese bitch has cell u lite, but still aint called a heavy weight
you made every mistake, how'd the fuck anyone breakn ur bars down
& I'll drop an anvil on your head, so you could see stars now
but his aint annimation, this is a key, detrimental to your health
and you aint seeing this fucking, even if you fine tuned my stealth
but I'll talkin out my ass >>>but that just what you posted
cuz the wakest thing on this site, would u if you host it
So imma break the rules, and go way over the bar mark
just to prove u cant eat Ant, like a congested ard bark
& so I'm tap dance all over u, I'll burning quick with the key son
& the fact that you posted off temple, get back on beat son



Fuck, Imma just post this.....

GL hommie, I got shit to do...
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Old 06-08-07, 11:17 AM   #8
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Wow, this is the whackest battle I have seen in a while, both of your structures made it seem like either drop was going to be workt the read, but ransum..you just filled your shit with uncreative and corny ass shit...sorry man..just none of it hit hard..and it seemed all of your "wordplay" was really forced and shouldnt even be called wordplay. Just don't think it was that "EZ" in the long run.

But as for AB, your shit was terrible as well. No hate at all, but your lines were so difficult to read, you misspelled and used wrong gramma and u could tell there should of been a word or to in a line..but u just left it out.....the way you say "and" at the beginning of every line sort of gets this repitition that you dont want because it creates a flow that aggrivates the reader, and then u pulled some bullshit vocabulary out of your "ass" and put it in your "shitty" verse. Yeah you had vocab but your punches were not even punches..although a couple of ur punches looked as if they were going to hit....but they didnt ...at all.....

but my vote has to go to RanSum, reason being is becuz he wasn't as consistantly whack. He had a couple of almost decent concepts...although he butchered them to death, they were still there none the less.

v/Ransum.
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Old 06-09-07, 12:39 AM   #9
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i ask this bitch to drop early.. but the fag ran and hind....
so exspect ran to stop ya flow.. like ya crash'ing ya ryde....
ok
If you have an album dont mention it...believe its a waste....
the only other person seein it.... is you and the reflection in the CD case....
meh
paused.. ''sharpining blade''..cut ur balls ur no man u serve no cause....
it was raw for your life to "permanently stop period"... like Menopause....
meh
make sure no justice...when i kill you an moms lawya....
beating you is the TRUTH..
i'll show u more 'Sharp Points' then swords through Inigo Montoya...
ha ok
i'll drop your 'candy ass' like im 'taste'in sum nerds'.. hommie you justa waste'in my words...
Antonio Banderas Whole Style's Ass!...like he been Tastin His Turds...
meh concept...ok punch
was praying for a no-show... well now im here for deploy...
he like crabs.. just standing there holding my sack lika grocery boy...
*are you saying u have crabs?...haha?!
you a pussy wit no fans... Cat in all honesty... i can see dat you scared..
Antonio Banderas couldn't "Rock the Crowd"...
for his fans-sake, if his fan-base endorsed in "Rockin-Chairs".... EZ....
mother fuckah...
haha decent finish

vs.

dude's as weak as they come, cant believe the fleets that u won
I run this forum and this block, bitch, at least u ran some
meh k
& that weapons of war are played, but i aint giving a fuck see
cuz U put bullets in the air, and claim to be shooting the breeze
ok
yeah ur speech is deadly, & u've barked up the wrong tree,
if your knocking out the competition, its cause you need listerine
lol ok
know oppurtunity knocks, u aint seeing me, never been dope
and I'll though homour, U Nice, but it'll be a blind joke
ok
& I know my verse is wak, so I'll take you to dinner date
Cuz this obese bitch has cell u lite, but still aint called a heavy weight
ok
you made every mistake, how'd the fuck anyone breakn ur bars down
& I'll drop an anvil on your head, so you could see stars now
nah
but his aint annimation, this is a key, detrimental to your health
and you aint seeing this fucking, even if you fine tuned my stealth
ok
but I'll talkin out my ass >>>but that just what you posted
cuz the wakest thing on this site, would u if you host it
meh k
So imma break the rules, and go way over the bar mark
just to prove u cant eat Ant, like a congested ard bark
good self...
& so I'm tap dance all over u, I'll burning quick with the key son
& the fact that you posted off temple, get back on beat son
ok

*Nothing special or impressive...Antonio has dropped wayyyyyyy better stuff from what I've seen of him for the past year on plenty other sites...i guess he didnt try...but he still had the most consistent verse...Ransum and alot of other ppl structure is confusin with all the dots and spaces and skipped lines...that easily takes away from the power it brings when the flow is unclear besides the punch being unclear...but because of consistency I say...

V/Antonio B.
 
Old 06-09-07, 12:52 AM   #10
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i ask this bitch to drop early.. but the fag ran and hind....
so exspect ran to stop ya flow.. like ya crash'ing ya ryde....
With better wording, i think this could have been descent. Don't try to force wordplay though.

you a pussy wit no fans... Cat in all honesty... i can see dat you scared..
Antonio Banderas couldn't "Rock the Crowd"...
for his fans-sake, if his fan-base endorsed in "Rockin-Chairs
EXTREMELY forced, But i loved the concept man, it was a bit simple. But ok.
Don't try to put so much into it, shorten it up. And think clearer when your writing


.vs


you made every mistake, how'd the fuck anyone breakn ur bars down
& I'll drop an anvil on your head, so you could see stars now
Played as hell, but with better wording could have been ok
it his tornequeit pressured, an my offensives too much an onslaught
but his best offense is his defense, and its bout to get dropped
In general. This wasn't that good. But i liked it as an opener.
Wording definately could have been better. And it was also a bit
simple



Pretty weak. Both didn't really have quoteables. Just lines with
potential and terrible punctuation. Poorly worded.


V/Antonio BARELY. very hard to choose this, because both of the rest
of your verses....were weak as hell.
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Old 06-09-07, 04:26 PM   #11
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However,

Antonio Banderas Loses for exceeding the line limit. It clearly states 10-14.

Ransum 3-1
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Old 06-09-07, 05:54 PM   #12
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Quote:
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However,

Antonio Banderas Loses for exceeding the line limit. It clearly states 10-14.

Ransum 3-1
Antonio Banderas 0-1


Cool,

Nice win Ransum...
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