In.....good luck

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...786&postcount=6
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...776&postcount=6

yup. check.

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...108&postcount=8

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Its simple as that, you suck at it so you better quit rap.
Been ghosting for peeps? Guess thats why most of RV is wack.
your bars are old as hell, thought they were coming from ancient times.
Dug a few of your lines....... and reported an archeological find.
This kid is wack as hell, no lie just writing a description.
.....cause Apo's day will never come like atheist predictions.
& dont worry, when kid's bite your rhymes, don't take it as a surprise.
....Its not that your dope, its cause your skill's just that size.
He's not smart. Posting his verse is like asking tourists for directions.
and in this battle his life's on the line like dial-up internet connections.
after dropping he'll be on the ground, kind of like the pic in his AV.
cause I'll be busting holes in Apo like having sex with newborn babies.
I'll rape P, this battle's like one of Apo's family parties.
Because after this verse, eosis will end up getting fucked over at RV.

ehhh..

Sorry for posting late

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I give this to apotheosis because of wordplay and punchlines.. his punches hit pretty hard, especially the one about a teachers dick.. nice verses from both of ya'll but ap took this cuz.. can you return the favor with a vote in my thread, thanx cuz..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

Check our rankings..its clear who is better..
..coz P.S. comes last..like extra info in a letter.
okay opener, nothing great
Sick of ya dumb shit..so bitch ima knock u out..
..coz ur teachers dick..is the smartest thing from ur mouth.
nice punch
You write like Mike Tyson..dogg it’s official,
..Coz ur skill is empty..like his initials.
not a great attempt at wordplay
Ur a geeky white kid..& ur writtens are crap..
..& ur so fuckin preppy..even ur name rocks Gap.
not good
Used ur punches before..there so dam old..
..ill write em on u nose..then begin 2 break the mould.
not good
If ur moms the word..I kno ur no religious believer..
..but by the way u spread it..I shud call u a preacher.
decent punch
Ur an ugly fuckka..& no chick wuda wanna romance you..
..& basically ur not wack………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦.
………………………………...its actually what u’ve advanced to.
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Its simple as that, you suck at it so you better quit rap.
Been ghosting for peeps? Guess thats why most of RV is wack.

good opener
your bars are old as hell, thought they were coming from ancient times.
Dug a few of your lines....... and reported an archeological find.
nice punch
This kid is wack as hell, no lie just writing a description.
.....cause Apo's day will never come like atheist predictions.
not great
& dont worry, when kid's bite your rhymes, don't take it as a surprise.
....Its not that your dope, its cause your skill's just that size.
um noooo.
He's not smart. Posting his verse is like asking tourists for directions.
and in this battle his life's on the line like dial-up internet connections.
nice punch
after dropping he'll be on the ground, kind of like the pic in his AV.
cause I'll be busting holes in Apo like having sex with newborn babies.
sick and not good
I'll rape P, this battle's like one of Apo's family parties.
Because after this verse, eosis will end up getting fucked over at RV.
not a good closer

this was close, Apo definitely not up to the level i've seen you spittin at lately. PS, you surprisingly came with some decent punches, kind of faded at the end. But enough to take this battle.

v- PS

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

your bars are old as hell, thought they were coming from ancient times.
Dug a few of your lines....... and reported an archeological find.

^Liked that

Tight drop Apo, youve got some hot shit in your verse. Good battle.

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truth^^^ i'll edit with my vote...tonight

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Its simple as that, you suck at it so you better quit rap.
Been ghosting for peeps? Guess thats why most of RV is wack.9
your bars are old as hell, thought they were coming from ancient times.
Dug a few of your lines....... and reported an archeological find.9.5
This kid is wack as hell, no lie just writing a description.
.....cause Apo's day will never come like atheist predictions.7
& dont worry, when kid's bite your rhymes, don't take it as a surprise.
....Its not that your dope, its cause your skill's just that size.7.5
He's not smart. Posting his verse is like asking tourists for directions.
and in this battle his life's on the line like dial-up internet connections.7.5
after dropping he'll be on the ground, kind of like the pic in his AV.
cause I'll be busting holes in Apo like having sex with newborn babies.6.5
I'll rape P, this battle's like one of Apo's family parties.
Because after this verse, eosis will end up getting fucked over at RV.8.5




apo
I'll be drunk later so I'll drop now

Check our rankings..its clear who is better..
..coz P.S. comes last..like extra info in a letter.10
Sick of ya dumb shit..so bitch ima knock u out..
..coz ur teachers dick..is the smartest thing from ur mouth.7.5
You write like Mike Tyson..dogg it’s official,
..Coz ur skill is empty..like his initials.9.5
Ur a geeky white kid..& ur writtens are crap..
..& ur so fuckin preppy..even ur name rocks Gap.7.5
Used ur punches before..there so dam old..
..ill write em on u nose..then begin 2 break the mould.8
If ur moms the word..I kno ur no religious believer..
..but by the way u spread it..I shud call u a preacher.8
Ur an ugly fuckka..& no chick wuda wanna romance you..
..& basically ur not wack………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦.
………………………………...its actually what u’ve advanced to.8


ps=9+9.5+7+7.5+7.5+6.5+8.5=55.5/70
apo=10+7.5+9.5+7.5+8+8+8=58.5/70

Vote- apo...two of the best verses i've read in a long time though...this could be the match of the tourny

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I'll be drunk later so I'll drop now

Check our rankings..its clear who is better..
..coz P.S. comes last..like extra info in a letter.
I LIKED THIS
Sick of ya dumb shit..so bitch ima knock u out..
..coz ur teachers dick..is the smartest thing from ur mouth.
NOT FEELIN THIS
You write like Mike Tyson..dogg it’s official,
..Coz ur skill is empty..like his initials.
LIKED THIS TOO...
Ur a geeky white kid..& ur writtens are crap..
..& ur so fuckin preppy..even ur name rocks Gap.
DIDNT LIKE THIS
Used ur punches before..there so dam old..
..ill write em on u nose..then begin 2 break the mould.
NOT FEELIN THIS AT ALL
If ur moms the word..I kno ur no religious believer..
..but by the way u spread it..I shud call u a preacher.
GAY..U MADE THIS VERY CONFUSING...N I DIDNT LIKE IT AT ALL
Ur an ugly fuckka..& no chick wuda wanna romance you..
..& basically ur not wack………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦.
………………………………...its actually what u’ve advanced to.
DIDNT LIKE THIS CLOSING
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Its simple as that, you suck at it so you better quit rap.
Been ghosting for peeps? Guess thats why most of RV is wack.
GOOD..I LIKED THIS
your bars are old as hell, thought they were coming from ancient times.
Dug a few of your lines....... and reported an archeological find.
HMM....OK I GUESS I WASNT BLOWN AWAY
This kid is wack as hell, no lie just writing a description.
.....cause Apo's day will never come like atheist predictions.
HMMM..NOT FEELIN IT
& dont worry, when kid's bite your rhymes, don't take it as a surprise.
....Its not that your dope, its cause your skill's just that size.
NOT FEELIN THIS
He's not smart. Posting his verse is like asking tourists for directions.
and in this battle his life's on the line like dial-up internet connections.
DIAL UP CONNECTION LINES ARE PLAYED...MAYBE NOT PERTICULARLY THIS ONE,BUT IN GENERAL...I DIDNT THINK THIS HIT VERY HARD....

after dropping he'll be on the ground, kind of like the pic in his AV.
cause I'll be busting holes in Apo like having sex with newborn babies.
EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW LOL...ITS MORE GROSS THAN GOOD.....WHERE WAS UR MIND AT YO? HAHA
I'll rape P, this battle's like one of Apo's family parties.
Because after this verse, eosis will end up getting fucked over at RV.
WASNT FEELIN THIS....


VERY CLOSE YALL
COMMENTS:NOT THE GREATEST DROP BY APO....BUT ,HE HAD ONE REALLY GOOD PUNCH,THE OPENER,N THE M.T. TYSON LINE WAS A GOOD PUNCH TOO...I WASNT FEELIN THE REST OF IT.............
P S ...U HAD ONE GOOD LINE,THE OPENER....SO LETS SAY BOTH UR OPENERS ARE EQUAL....APO HAD THAT TYSON PUNCH ,U HAD THE ARCHOLOGICAL LINE,THE TYSON ONE TAKES IT...THE REST OF BOTH OF URS WERE NOT GOOD........SO BASED ON THOSE 2.............APO WINS......NOT BY A WHOLE LOT THOUGH...

...shit why the hell is this still open? KARL should have brought some voters in....jesus

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It's always me. Remember there's two other mods. I happened to be busy last night and I hoped this would've been taken care of.

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