like I said 25 line max.
you soit first.

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okay. I'll go first. I'll leave you to spit ya shit later.
I gotta go out soon so I won't be able to do this later.

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This bitch punk roll up on me frettin/
The only dance he learnt from his ma was 2 steppin/
I ride the mic like Guyver here, outa control/
Spit weak rhymes bitch shove 'em up ya ass with ya 17 ince fro/
whats that seepin from your forehead? originality?/
Shut up fool you ain't on my level, you can't even step to me/
To me you jus like glass boy, I look straight through you/
Fuck with me ya I make ya smell like hot do do/
this rhyme has got you quivverin from my hecticity/
for some reason you think some things in life come for free/
get the fuck off my dick and walk away from me/
cos if you weren't so blind then maybe you would see/
Its not a smart move to fuck wiv me/
Think you can step to the heat boy you can't see me/
cos you're jus a piece of shit on the floor decaying next to me/
What does it take to be the best of the best/
you gotta be unpredictable, higher than the rest/
we leave these kids in fear, an in their pants they keep crappin/
all i wanted was a beer man, shit happens/

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CHECKIN IN YO

Its Ova its done the sky's gettin cloudy/
You Neglect to get crunk wit out gettin rowdy/
This Man needs lucky charms to test his luck/
They call this kid millwakee because he stack nothin but bucks/
Yo-YO is in the game cause YO pays dues/
Yo in the game cause hell blaze u/
Dont try to curse this don's fame/
Guyver's rhymes overated like lebron James/
Im livin underground like pastor troy/
more of a buzz on the streets than a poster boy/
I said i got 6 figures haters said boy stop lyin/
I got 50 ways to get rich or die tryin/
This is just the start of terror im bout to inflict/
Headbustin, Killin, stuntin, robbin I got 45's that go popin/
You and yo people's is done/ Its YO-Yo the killa of the childron/
This man is a broke ass nelly/ sick wit it but still fuck lil girls like R Kelly/
Evry one wanna stab but everybody know I stay strapped like a bookbag/

Hit up the votes fame all day lets go wehre yall at!!!!!!!!

nice battle...
guyver4mk ...punches came week.....flow was basic...structure was ok...wordplay was ok....personals were week...5/10
yo yo.....some nice punches but some a bit played.....structure was basic....flow was there...personals were ok....wordplay was elemntry....overall7/10
v/yo yo

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Both verses got off to a slow start and neither one finished all that strongly. But YO pulled it together a little better in the middle while Guyver seemed like he had no direction. Yo also brought some more interesting comparisons like the "Lebron James" and "pastor troy" lines. Gotta give it to him on those grounds. No official vote from me yet -- I'm still workin' on those 100 posts.

guyver got this battle because his rythmes were more better other dude was good too..but allin all vote=guyver

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Uppin for votes.
.:UPPIN:. .:FOR:. .:VOTES:.
We need some more votes on this!

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Come on yall i vote all the damn time hit it up wit some good critizim and vote for who u think won this biatch

Man we uppin for more votes vote i vote for erryones elses it takes like 1 min fo vote

Guyver's was pretty weak. Seemed like it was struggling, but nothing came out. No good hits, nothing funny. Yo-Yo's started of nice, lost the strength at the end. Overall it was Yo-Yo's. I got a while before I can vote though, sorry!?!

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Gotta give this one to Yo-Yo. Otha niggaz structure was just so-so, punches was weak. Otha nigga put shit togetha nicer, crazy punches, and good wordplay. I said i got 6 figures haters said boy stop lyin/
I got 50 ways to get rich or die tryin/ - I was feelin' that shit, fosho. Gotta go wit that nigga yo

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Keep votin on this shit yall hit the votes hot battle vote away

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