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07-31-06, 02:10 PM | #1 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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NEW SPuL!!!! "I'm In The Game" FIYA SON!!! (DROP LINKS!!!)
IP: 720D 94E5
word my second straight original beat track. and thought this was good time to drop this track, seeing with the recent bullshit ~_~
www.soundclick.com/spul Intro: SPuL First verse: SPuL Hook: SPuL Second verse: SPuL Third verse: SPuL Beat: Mister KA LINKS: 1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232428 2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232476 |
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07-31-06, 02:32 PM | #2 | ||||
Ike
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IP: F5EA AA2D
im feelin the beat...
ahh you def. seem like your starting to get a lot more comfy behind the mic...your delivery is getting better....different pitches in your voice and what not... flow is good..never really falls off at all...good job on that...multies are nice.... kinda seems like you upped your quality a lil bit too...maybe some diff mixing?.... hook is kinda catchy...maan..i definitely like your music better now that your on some original beats.... lyrics are coo...nothin stood out to me like whoa or anything...but its not like you were trying to dish out mad punches on this type of subject here... overall man..good job on this...keep it up
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07-31-06, 04:17 PM | #3 | |||||||
The Light
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IP: C3EB D97D
i told what i thought about track. track was good IMO..
as far as mixing ... -_- :P .. .
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07-31-06, 04:24 PM | #4 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 720D 94E5
^lmao stfu foo!! but word props for help and thanks for feed. upppppppp ~_~
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07-31-06, 04:31 PM | #5 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: 426A B1D7
This track is pretty hott, you got good quality, and the beat is pretty dope. Your verse was sick and it flowed to that beat perfect. Your rhymes was tight, you had some dope shit in your verse.
OVERALL - 4/5 keep it up yo
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07-31-06, 08:21 PM | #7 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 720D 94E5
word appreciate feedback y'all. uppppp
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07-31-06, 11:07 PM | #8 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 0775 E664
yeah. you sent me this before. Umm YES the voice is finally better!!!! congrats mad props from me. The lyrics in this is nice. good flow in my opinion. The multi's were decent. nothing over the edge. but it was still nice. the quality is good. what you record with? and yeah i like this hook its straight. pretty cool. this is one of your better tracks for sure. keep at it man 8.1/10
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08-01-06, 09:22 AM | #9 | |||||
Is Betta Than You
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IP: 0594 3125
hmmm, nice track nice track, seems like you come the same on every track though, like your style emotion and flow is known b4 i even listen, but regardless it was still a good track holla
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232696 |
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08-01-06, 09:27 AM | #10 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: B6FA 4DE9
Listenin' haa mister ka again ya already know, intro is nice..yup i kinna agree with team one we kinda expect how u come in but thats a good thing i think for u because u got a solid flow nah mean like we know its u, i love that jumpy style u got goin..flow is hot..lyrics is funny..hook is catchy too g, lyrics are pretty dope..delivery is hot too..qual is gr8 too mayne..pretty dope track g, 9/10 fo real hot joint..ayo SpuL im goin to NJ on sunday but i brought the mic out here so i can record until sunday and yo lets get our collab going
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08-01-06, 11:01 AM | #11 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 1673 A881
^props for feed to y'all and yo get on AIM. we can do this
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08-01-06, 12:31 PM | #12 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 1673 A881
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08-01-06, 01:29 PM | #13 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
ur flow is starting to sound more and more like Triple's
which is good... u have a distinct voice as well...so, it's not like you "sound like he does" beat is slick flow is good lyrics are common...nothing major...But, this is a feel good track...So, in that sense, they are ample Hook is mixed well...maybe amp it .5 decibels not bad there slick soundin track bro 1 |
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08-01-06, 02:56 PM | #14 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 1673 A881
^word appreciate feed man
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08-01-06, 03:01 PM | #15 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 86B7 B5B2
Aight listenin now
Whats Hot:Quality is fire damn yuo improved like crazy Flow is good The beat is fire Whats Good:Lyrics are straight multies are straight delivery and pressense are good Whats ok:n/a Whats not hot:n/a word this is a pretty good track perfect for a mixtape track Could imagine them people bumpin this 8/10 |
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