word my second straight original beat track. and thought this was good time to drop this track, seeing with the recent bullshit ~_~


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Intro: SPuL
First verse: SPuL
Hook: SPuL
Second verse: SPuL
Third verse: SPuL
Beat: Mister KA

LINKS:
1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232428
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232476

im feelin the beat...

ahh you def. seem like your starting to get a lot more comfy behind the mic...your delivery is getting better....different pitches in your voice and what not...

flow is good..never really falls off at all...good job on that...multies are nice....

kinda seems like you upped your quality a lil bit too...maybe some diff mixing?....

hook is kinda catchy...maan..i definitely like your music better now that your on some original beats....

lyrics are coo...nothin stood out to me like whoa or anything...but its not like you were trying to dish out mad punches on this type of subject here...

overall man..good job on this...keep it up

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i told what i thought about track. track was good IMO..

as far as mixing ... -_- :P .. .

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^lmao stfu foo!! but word props for help and thanks for feed. upppppppp ~_~

This track is pretty hott, you got good quality, and the beat is pretty dope. Your verse was sick and it flowed to that beat perfect. Your rhymes was tight, you had some dope shit in your verse.

OVERALL - 4/5

keep it up yo

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word appreciate feedback y'all. uppppp

yeah. you sent me this before. Umm YES the voice is finally better!!!! congrats mad props from me. The lyrics in this is nice. good flow in my opinion. The multi's were decent. nothing over the edge. but it was still nice. the quality is good. what you record with? and yeah i like this hook its straight. pretty cool. this is one of your better tracks for sure. keep at it man 8.1/10

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hmmm, nice track nice track, seems like you come the same on every track though, like your style emotion and flow is known b4 i even listen, but regardless it was still a good track holla

rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232696

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Listenin' haa mister ka again ya already know, intro is nice..yup i kinna agree with team one we kinda expect how u come in but thats a good thing i think for u because u got a solid flow nah mean like we know its u, i love that jumpy style u got goin..flow is hot..lyrics is funny..hook is catchy too g, lyrics are pretty dope..delivery is hot too..qual is gr8 too mayne..pretty dope track g, 9/10 fo real hot joint..ayo SpuL im goin to NJ on sunday but i brought the mic out here so i can record until sunday and yo lets get our collab going

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ur flow is starting to sound more and more like Triple's

which is good...

u have a distinct voice as well...so, it's not like you "sound like he does"

beat is slick

flow is good

lyrics are common...nothing major...But, this is a feel good track...So, in that sense, they are ample

Hook is mixed well...maybe amp it .5 decibels

not bad there


slick soundin track bro


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^word appreciate feed man