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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
B. rantis 1 20.00%
Telekinetic 4 80.00%
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Old 01-13-04, 02:47 AM   #1
Telekinetic
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Telekinetic vs B.rantis

IP: 2EE2 BE85

10 lines
no feeding
no hate or dr
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Old 01-13-04, 03:02 AM   #2
Telekinetic
Poetic Justice
 
IP: 2EE2 BE85

This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this
B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis)
Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED
You got no referrals, yea really nobody would unless they was insane
Cause just the lines above shattered you like a window I bring the pain (window pain)
Im rippin veins an arteries you haven't even began to scratch the surface
You're just a freeloader on this sight uppin post counts your only purpose
I just ended this guys amazing 5 post career with 10 lines that I wrote
Shit I didn't even have to throw any punch lines cause this kids the joke
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Old 01-13-04, 03:18 AM   #3
Telekinetic
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IP: 2EE2 BE85

Uppin for B. rantis to post. Come on don't disapoint me
Youve had 15 more min. right now than it took me to post
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Old 01-13-04, 03:18 AM   #4
B. rantis
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Like John Travolta you should face it Telekinetic
cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks
unless you bummy like yourself, broke with an 86 chevy,
like it says your a flyweight, my rhymes are heavy
My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours
tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse
and i know u thinkin' " why B. Game bustin on me?"
because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3
Your 3-3 im sorry to say its the unwritten law,
im keepin a donut in my loss column, ur simply played out like pogs
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Old 01-13-04, 03:29 AM   #5
Telekinetic
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IP: 2EE2 BE85

Lets get some votes goin.............................................. .............
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Old 01-13-04, 03:29 AM   #6
GrassHopper
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I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do this, I read the rules but didn't see any mention of not being able to leave a vote even though I can't select a winner in the poll. LoL please just warn me, don't ban me. Thank you.
Anyhoo...

Quote:
Telekinetic:
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED
Ha, not a real punch, but still kinda funny


Quote:
B. Rantis:
cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks

tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse
LoL...ch-ch-ch-chia pet!

because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3
LOL...best line of the battle


Telekinetic, I'm not trying to hate, it's just that a lot of your concepts have been done to death, honest. Also, your punches took to long to get to the point, I'm not really sure how to explain this, but you need to word your lines differently to get the full effect of each pun. Feel me?
B. Rantis took this battle with a better verse, wittier punches, and better lines.
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Old 01-13-04, 03:32 AM   #7
Wise Ways
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aight battle....on tha verge of weak..

Seemed close but Tele definately got this cuz
of metas....wordplay... punches... and personals
B.. came with those too.. just tele edged you out in all of them

so

v/Tele

drop an honest vote please.....it's getting slept on
I took tha time to vote on yours...thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106344
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Old 01-13-04, 11:01 AM   #8
B. rantis
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We need ppl. to vote .................................................. .................................................. ....................
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Old 01-13-04, 11:55 AM   #9
B. rantis
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We need ppl. to vote .................................................. .................................................. ....................
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Old 01-13-04, 12:02 PM   #10
Telekinetic
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IP: 2EE2 BE85

What the hell happend to the board............................................. .................
It shut down last night saying somthing about them goin on vacation..................
Anyway we need votes............................................. ..................................
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Old 01-13-04, 12:04 PM   #11
explicitot
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From: Ottawa(Da moFukin HipHop capital)
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vote=tele
harder punches was mostly one sided b came wit nuttin

anybody do me a favour peep dis shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106180
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Old 01-13-04, 12:06 PM   #12
SaM sKILLeT
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I can't poll vote.

I think B.Rantitis won this battle.
Quote:
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED
Telekinetic, this was your best line.

Quote:
My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours
tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse

B.Rantitis, this was your best.

You both came iight, and pretty even, but B. took this.

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Old 01-13-04, 12:18 PM   #13
Telekinetic
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IP: 2EE2 BE85

SAM get the verses right before you post like that.
You all said I lost an you showed my shit an said it won.
lol its aight tho
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Old 01-13-04, 12:23 PM   #14
B. rantis
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what are u talking about tele, he said i won like 5 times in his post, i dont think he messed up
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Old 01-13-04, 12:24 PM   #15
B. rantis
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yea i dunno who his vote was for, too confusing of a post
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