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Fools On My Dick I aSSur You I got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt...
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aight checkin in............................check check check check check......................................

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GhOsT - WrITeRZ
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Fools On My Dick I aSSur You I got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt...
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Names Jezus,but not the dude u know from Sunday school
Only cheek Im turnin in on my ass so u can kiss that one too
Yo, Aesthetic knows he cant win,but he still challenge me
Just so he could brag that he got the chance to battle me
I could get physicly critical and biblicly super lyrical
If u win, YOU should be called Jesus cuz that be a miracle
Yo talent is minimal, so shut yo trap wrap it up and leave rap
Aesthetic eat me? he aint good enuff to drink the water out my kneecap
Wonna be thug, I choke ya out wit yo hollow chain and pendant
Yo ass goin down in a ball of flames like a 9/11 flight attendant
Ray Charles can see ure done, chewed up and spit out like gum
Ima say I merked this "MC" so u can at least pretend to be one

thats 12 hope u dont mind....

Verse:

Gold Album Gospel Artist?? equalz to NOTHING, U from Weak Crew??Ya best member prolly isnt a member//1
And i beat all the others before Christ(B.C.) so bad they dont even remember//2..lol
Why Jesusl do Text?, I'll Cease to Spit 'Vowelz' An let the 'Eyez'-Inspect//3
Coz rest aSSured i got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt//4
Listen I attack yo cleavage bitch, wit clenched fists, that leave u feverish/5
U from Jerusalem?? Kid I leave u wit 50 men, let them see u wit, a cercumsized penis bitch/6..lol
"Here to save u all" haha...It's a sad unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative and impoyd a " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit/7
Wit hollow tips, aimed at yo cerebic, and 50 hits to yo kindeys bitch/8
simply prevents, yo battle rec is weak infants, and the battle events, i re-invent/9
Lyrical Jesus??Ii think u a thief and shit and like fiendish chicks,Like yo mom wit teeny tits, I leave yo faggot gospol singing clique meaningless/ 10


I said 10lines and u broke the rule.......another sad dissappointment anywho........VOTESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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GhOsT - WrITeRZ
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Fools On My Dick I aSSur You I got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt...
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Ure newer but if u wernt ud know that " oh ure jesus from the bible and jeruselam and u aint no god ure gopsel blah blah" is played but its aight lets peeps vote

New or Old homey....i am good when it comes to MErkin..lol Anyhow...VOTESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NO DR NO HATE NO BS

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GhOsT - WrITeRZ
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My Vote goes too Lyrical-Jesus, just thought had better punches...better flow and structure
This shit:
Yo, Aesthetic knows he cant win,but he still challenge me
Just so he could brag that he got the chance to battle me
I could get physicly critical and biblicly super lyrical
If u win, YOU should be called Jesus cuz that be a miracle

ILL ILL ILL!!
and this isn't a d/r vote or ne thing he voted against me in a previous battle.

Iight here's the 411 on this battle

Structure-Goes to Lyrical Jesus, cause Aesthetic was stretched out and his lines were to long

Flow-Lyrical Jesus cause his shit was shorter, easier to read, and juss flowed better

Punches-Tie Both had weak punches, but Lyrical Jesus got this by his punches not being played as much and not having been stretched out

Vocab-Aesth, cause his shit did have better words he rhymed wit, juss couldn't read his lines as well...........

Wordplay-Aesth, cause he did use catchy wordplay juss not able to read lines

Conclusion-Aesth probably would've won if he would've shortened his lines but he didn't and it killed him bad, because it was hard and complicated to read it, so shorten your lines Aesth.......

Vote-Lyrical Jesus

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i'm voting for lyrical only because i had no idea what that other guy was talking about.

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im a have ta give this to lyrical jesus , his spit was koo cept that he used christ too much. aesthetic yo shit was not koo it was wack after the first line it didnt even start out good soo VOTE = lyrical jesus

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Uppin goddamit!!!!!! 3 more votes cmon cmon uppin uppin uppin uppin up up up up up up...........................