reet my brothers. could yall help me with my rappin. i got sum gud ideas but i need elp 2 win battles. teach me

no dude your hopless
sorry

lol thats pretty harsh skrad, i think you might be a buster

cumon guys give us a chance

what specifically do you want to know

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"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

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teach me the bacics show me how to do things n show me the rule n stuff.... i noit mite take a while but cum on i well keen ta m8

well keen ta m8? Me too. lol.
Well, the robotic response leads to some:
Multis, Metas, Personals, Wordplay, Flow... blah. There's a sticky about elements of rap. I don't know if people are going to help you until you try to help yourself first and ask more specific questions. You want help in general??? Read every friggin' battle. Learn what people like, and what is wack. Analyze yourself. Write. Then after awhile look back at your old shit and see if it is actually good to you. Go ahead and battle other beginners. It's just a forum, experiment.

true^^

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I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill

look at this motha fucka mothrill thinkin he da man wanting 2 be eminem but he cant cause he got a tan see eminem got blode hair blue eyes and is white how in the hell u gona be eminem when you cant even rap right

Use a period. Then, use Bitch Slapped.

No beef in this forum. Only helping.

As for Manny. All I can say is listen to a lot of rap, and write a lot.

hey manny if you wana battle me and you should some battles i am new to so it would be even so get back to me on that one. and i mean it dont have to be serious just so we can get the basics down and stuff peace

do like me, eat sleep and breath ryhmes,
i been on my right side all night low-ng
i think its time to switch and row-ll
damn left side is uncomforatabow-le
damn, i geuss itll do tho
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that honestly came to me one night when i woke up, you gotta think of nuthin but ryhms, im not dropin an E-bomb here but eminem failed the 9th grade 3 times cuz all he had on his mind wa gettin there namean? im not tellin u to slack off but every ounce of free tyme your brain should be werkin, any two werds tha ryhme right them down then make the lines to go with them, thats what i did when i started in 99, i was shocked as hell to see em do it in 8 mile, and i honestly still keep lil notes in my pocket in shit to werk on ion down time and shit like that, s theres my 2 cents, well, more like a dolla, im out, holla

yea i agree