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Old 02-10-04, 03:05 PM   #1
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Stone Faces (PeEP)

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Aight thiz a cut I wrote and recorded when I waz fuuuucked up.....but I think itz pretty decent so far, Im eventually gonna redo it, but what yall think so far? Feedback and drop yah linx.....
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Old 02-10-04, 03:11 PM   #2
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this beat is dope..i think i heard it somewhere before..this has a Rhymesayers feel to it..yeah this track is dope so far man..i DLed it..the lyrics and expression are sick..damn dope job on this man..please return the favor..

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Old 02-10-04, 03:14 PM   #3
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No doubt playa, appreciated, and yeah thiz an atmosphere beat I looped, i waz feelin it so I hada use it....Thanx
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Old 02-11-04, 07:19 AM   #4
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Old 02-12-04, 12:10 AM   #5
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your flow is dope but your losin it at some places.......Lyrics are good but sometimes your lackin some rimes that would of help go with the flow.......The emotion is there and I can really feel you........nice shit men
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Old 02-13-04, 11:56 PM   #6
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appreciate the feedback playa......no doubt....ima return the favor 2morrow aight......anymore feedz??
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Old 02-14-04, 11:32 AM   #7
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listenin.........beat is tight as hell........flow is pretty good........falls off a lil, but u recover it nicely.........vocab is good........nice multis...........lyrics r ill i thought.........wordplay was good........punchlines were tight..........

overall - this was another pretty hot track.........

when ur cd comes out its gonna be tight as hell judgin from the shit uve already put out........
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Old 02-14-04, 12:21 PM   #8
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Peep My Ish "We The Illest" And I'll Give U Feedback On Urs ...
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Old 02-16-04, 11:38 AM   #9
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no doubt playa, juzt replied 2 yah cut.....i been a lil inactive lately, but im good 2 go now
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Ya Thanx For My Feedback ..... Listenin' To Urs Now .... Beat Is Pretty Nice .. I'm Feelin' That Shit .... Vocals Kinda Low ... U Got Ya Own Voice .. Which Is Coo..Delivery/Presence Is There And Pretty Good .. Quality Pretty Nice I'm Feelin' That ... Overall Track Is Tight .. Deep Lyrics I'm Feelin' Those Also ....
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Old 02-16-04, 06:34 PM   #11
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no doubt, appreciated
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