10-15 lines
no dr hate ir crew
u spit first
u get 20 mins to spit

iight lets get it goin........................

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Ayo, this is J......chekin' in.....................

will spit in 20 minutes or less.....................

Here it is...

you gotta be insane to step to a battle with a lyrical Master
and the day after tommorrow won't supress this rhytmic disaster

that I'll unleash on your azz like a pimp on a 2 bit hoe
the only spit you'll release is when yure wrapped on my knob to blow

I buss thru yo chest like aliens, acidic lyric leave you blazin'
n yur resistance to my voltage, couldn't keep my SINE WAVEs from PHASin' *

mi adjacent flo triangulates hos, foe, your position is marked
i've spit 8 LINEs and FINISHed u before your cunt azz could start

now, your only hopes for victory is to ride my dick
using my shyt to come up with something original to spit

ok, I'll treat you like all my other bitches, and you can kiss my feet
and sell your pathetic rhymes and azz for free, while pacing the hard concrete

fuk u think, im some mark, pussy ass nicca, I'll buy you some flowers
and I'll pull a Biggie Smalls on ya n sprinkle u wit golden showers

* Ohm's Law. Thought I'd get scientific on dat ass.

jsmoove wanna be da best he think he the bomb/
he couldnt spit louder over an amplified intercom/
this kid thinks if he roll blunts his lines will elevate/
i blow lead through ur chest and make the whole hood celebrate/
r.i.p kid to ur family this battle i dedicate/
im 6-4 kid and i aint neva gunna stop/
u need to go to tutorials and learn be4 u try to reach the top/
when he spit it should be called a black on black crime/
cuz ur killin ur race with every corney ass line/
u wanna be the main event u gotta be better then prime time/

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aight insane....uppin this one for real...............

uppin for some voters lets get this shyt goin iight............................................. .......

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aight nice battle

sane nigga u had some nice punches in durr and a nice flow ya structure was good but it was a lil simple

j- u had better punches ..wordplay...nice flow and structure,,,u had good vocab to...

insane 7/10
jsmoove 8.5/10

v/jsmoove
holla at ma battle in ma sig aight niggas wun

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Insane ya verse was aight...some of ya rhymes was simple but your punches wasen't bad. J - had pretty good personals and his punches were a little better. Your flow was aight...at times it was simple but other parts were better.

Overall Vote: JSmoove just edged it out

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aight nice battle

sane nigga u had some nice punches in durr and a nice flow ya structure was good but it was a lil simple

j- u had better punches ..wordplay...nice flow and structure,,,u had good vocab to...

insane 7/10
jsmoove 8.5/10

v/jsmoove
holla at ma battle in ma sig aight niggas wun

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uppin this one again so we can close this battle...thanks for your votes and criticism...elevate. 1.

iight.....
Insane babe- 10/10
aint spoken to Jsmoove so id give im a 7/10 for Vocab worddplay n structure

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_-_-*baby_gal*-_-_

Insane ur verse was aight..punches were ok and the structure wasn't all that...Smoove same wit you...punches,structure & vocab were good...Smoove got this one...punches were harder...

vote = JSmOoVe