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Old 06-29-04, 06:01 PM   #1
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Exclamation JSmoove Vs Envee

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"Your Gettin Burried Alive"

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Old 07-01-04, 11:25 AM   #2
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Just Checkin in (and logging in)... I couldn't post yesterday... Yo!!! You asked me to drop a topic, and because you couldn't speak on it, you change it! The topic was "Book of Revelation" from the bible. Just to show you how versatile I am...I'll write on your NEW topic...
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Old 07-01-04, 12:03 PM   #3
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IN-A-ME lies the darkness of an enemy, are you feeling me
I try to be all that I can be, but he be tricking me

Telling me, what's wrong is right, so I refuse to fight
the tendacy to hold up the light, Jesus, I need your will and might

To erradicate, completely eliminate the gloom ahead that's my ill fate
for my lack to subjugate to a higher power has predestinate my soul into the LAKE

of FIRE, brimestone and ashes, burning my flesh like acid
gnashing of teeth, cursing and biting, flaccid eyes becoming placid

Motionless, all because I didn't accept Jesus, "I can't believe this!"
flesh is rotting all around me in this HELL of pain a human feces

but I'm still alive, tho' my bodies smoking from a 666 degree fire that can't be put out
and my pouts become desperate screams and shouts for a drop of water in my mouth

but nevermore, like the RAVEN, my name was not scribed in the Book of Life
so this damned soul is committed to the flame, and I must endure an eternity of strife

I am the enemy that dwelled IN-A-ME because I denied giving the victory to HE
that died on calvary for you and me, HE dwells in the clouds, a HOLY TRINITY!
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