A collab with me and my boy Nova.
Verse order is: Nova, Doom, Doom, Nova

http://doom.dmusic.com/


Links:
Um..none. I left feed on like 7-8 tracks between yesterday and today alone.

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listening:
Beat:not bad,not my type of beat but still
Quality:not very good but better than mine lol,second rapper tho had a better kality
FLowretty good,yeah

lol word. The first rapper is using a computer mic. The second isn't.

Got a lot of mixed reactions on the beat though. Soem people love it - some hate it. Thanks for the feed. Up for mas.

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nice beat........... what's good? Nova i heard you before i don't think i need to tell you how you sound, you sound pretty good... i like how you tried to ride the beat, you did pretty good i must say.. goodness i like this beat... Dooms- nice lyrics, flow is pretty aight... you sound a lil' too close to the mic, cuz ya first verse sounded really shakey. funny you tried to diss me lmao.. ha nice attempt sweetie.. i ain't mad at you- you pissed me off at times too lol, Nova 4th verse was off ... i was told about a collab you wanted dooms, what's up on that? hit me up..
~1~

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^^LF, I'm not sure if you're trying to diss me or what with that mixed mesage of a 'feed'. One minute you were critting the piece, next minute you said somehting about me trying to diss you - do you think you're mentioned in this track?? But regarding the collab, yeah, I'm still looking for someone who can deliver.

This is the first audio I recorded after the new software BTW - so I was still adjusting my self to the limitations of my mic. The tracks toward the bottom are better quality with each track for obvious reasons. I don't like to make excuses so I didn't bother to mention it. Wanted honest and objective feed. Uppin for more of it. Gracias.

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return the favor on "Did i elevate" pz

i wasn't dissing you... wth? manye, you read it wrong, and yes it seems as tho you were tryna diss me in the track.. i was typin a critique as i was listening to the track.. that's prolly why you got a "mixed" message.. but i asked if you still wanted me to hop on a track or sumthin cuz i got some private messages sayin so.. that's why i asked what's up? if not, then coo...... just get at me, pm me or w/e..

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1st dude struggled to flow at times, had trouble wif delivery, quality was ok
2nd dude quality was a lil betta, couldnt really tell though
flow was better, lyrics were a lil betta also
beat is ok i kinda liked it
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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

^^thanks for the feed mayne.

LF:

I'm not sure where you're seeing it - but no, this track definitely does not mention you. My diss tracks have names in em and I still don't see where you woulda thought this was about you, but no, it isn't. I don't fuck with subliminals - make it out in the open, lol. Ask "Low Low".

In regards to the track, yeah I have a spot open for a femcee. If you want to get into that - I'm def down. OMB told be he spoke to you about it - so if you got his seal of approval thne you're def cool in my book. I tried to shoot you an IM, but guess ya ain't been on. Hit me back. Uno.

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Not a bad track, beat was alright, nothing that made me go DAMN.. But yeah, lyrics were aiight.. Flow got a bit too slow, or off beat at points for both of you.. Also if you wanna sound more professional you need to drop the spitting on pre made verse times too.. It sounded like you were just hitting the verses up with lyrics to fit whats already there..

So yeah, just start tampering with pulling loops out of the beats you download and using cool edit like more of a dj program. You'll find your stuff will start to sound a lot more professional when you have control over the beat aswell as the lyrics and hooks you put down.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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^^thanks for the feedback, I def agree with about 90% of it except this:



I'm not getting you on this one - you saying that we spit the lyrics to the 16 bar time point when it when to bridge, or are you saying we ignored what the beat was doing? If you're saying the latter - then I follow you and agree on this track (the first). If you're saying something else - I don't know what. Can you elaborate?

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Well now a days when I get a beat I usually extract the loops and give myself full control over how long the verses are, the way the hooks sound and all sorts of shit. It just sounded like you got the beat and just over layed your lyrics but didnt really switch the beat itself up to suit the type of track you were making. Which can sound fine most of the time, but yeah it doesent do much for the music side of your track other than just pasting your vocals ontop.. Which makes stuff sound amature..

Having said that, the track still worked out alright, but you needed to raise the volume of the vocals a bit and work with your EQ settings to raise the treble a bit in your verses.. Just makes it sound a lil more crisp since you both got fairly deep voices..

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