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Old 10-04-05, 05:44 AM   #1
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"I'm Sorry"

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Ox laid this track to a beat that Khi made from a sample that came from I dunno WHERE the hell he finds these shits, but he sure finds em and kills em. I LOVE this beat. This song'll make a mofo water up if they're actually paying attention to it. Classic music, point black period.





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Old 10-04-05, 06:03 AM   #2
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Mhmm.. Beat is ill.. I think ox needs to tone down his vocals and be a lil less loud and a bit more melodic on these deep tracks mainly to suit the beat and vibe more.. But other than that, I can respect this shit.. Flows on point.. Lyrics are good.. Jus the loudness of the vocals is the only problem in this track.. But I guess thats jus his style..

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Old 10-05-05, 04:08 AM   #3
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^^Nos, tghanks for the feed man. The track sounds 'loud' because of the clipping. It's not bad, but it's definitely not the lasre quality you normally here fomr me.

and LMFAO @ ass emporer

Oh yeah, viagra to this thread.
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Old 10-05-05, 05:54 AM   #4
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*listening*

got that 3-6 mafia type of feel. the flow is a little too slow for me... and some of the emphasis was just a little corny, everyone got there own style but meh. it DID get better & pick up through the middle... im feelin what your sayin. keep practicin..

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Old 10-05-05, 06:15 PM   #5
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*listening*

got that 3-6 mafia type of feel. the flow is a little too slow for me... and some of the emphasis was just a little corny, everyone got there own style but meh. it DID get better & pick up through the middle... im feelin what your sayin. keep practicin..

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Yeah, thanks for the feedback. Once again, this isn't me, this is my boy Ox. I guess I can see what you're saying about the flow.

I'll hit your link. Uno.

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Old 10-07-05, 04:30 PM   #6
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uh huh..uppin for all the cocksmokers who I left feed on and ain't done nada yet.
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Old 10-10-05, 08:54 AM   #7
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Beat: love it
Flow: pretty good
Rhyming: decent
Delivery: good


Overall:...some played lines and cliches..."part of the problem or solution"...eh eh...wuts next "Time heals all wounds"...nah


the prince shit is hot though...


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Old 10-13-05, 08:48 PM   #8
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Listening..

The beat is fucking dope as shit.. the flow is pretty good.. I think his flow sounds fine, whatever.. his delivery is decent enough.. some of the lines didn't sound that good.. like, they weren't original.. overall, a pretty good track. it started out a little slow, but picked out and came out pretty nice.
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