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Old 12-17-06, 09:45 AM   #1
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LBL Championship Match: 1. Roger Glocks (19-1) vs. 2. John Hensley (7-1)

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Old 12-17-06, 01:45 PM   #2
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i guess 16 cuz i got mad battles

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Old 12-17-06, 03:29 PM   #3
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word you too, 16 is cool.
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Old 12-21-06, 07:57 PM   #4
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Quote:
LYNNKINGPIN: i pray everyday lol



That's a keyword fellas, and Glocks needs another plan.
He isn't praying..
.. but he IS on his knees with his mouth open thankin another man.
You've won 9 straight, but ain't makin any clout.
I haven't seen a streak that easy..
.. since your mom and sister ran naked through my house.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
I don't know if your gay, but in this case, look at this shit.
I'll win, and this'll be a G-loss that'll mimic the shit you put on ya lips..
You claim you AIN'T a rider, but you got a vain disorder.
Cuz you've been harassin my dick for so long it's filing a restrainin' order.
As far as wording goes, face it bitch, you suck with it.
Shit's scrambled so much.. Vince Young and Vick are hittin you up for tips.
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.
It's a loss for ya buddy, i don't mean to make ya world end.
But if you want another belt.. i left a couple of em' strapped to ya girls bed.



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Old 12-21-06, 10:29 PM   #5
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illl drop ina second...juss got in..ill finish my shit
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Old 12-21-06, 11:19 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by John Hensley
3. Roger Glocks - Glocks is an up and comer still. But while he's been on his way up he's had some success and has really improved, he drops some of the freshes concepts online, and the only thing that's ever held him back was awkward wording. But Glocks is the current champ at RapVerse right now, and just recently surpassed Butlers record of most consecutive weeks as champ. He's no joke and i expect him to make an impact here.


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I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now



^LIAR!

keep lyin ur ass off, you feel Glocks and u know im one of the best
cuz he's gonna beat Gun!....the game where u fight indians in the old west
Lets brainstorm a second, your bitch wanted to pick my brains
but opinions are like assholes n I squashed ever idea ya girl threw my way
your gonna be freakin pissed u blew this battle, it's a mark on ur career
it's like we got visited by a Head coch in this battle...John Madden here
no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never meet her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
Me and ya mom had good times in the past, shit was fate
n John Hensley taught me alot but atleast im learning from my mistakes
Mercules beat you! im 4-0 against him, your not a test
its like the toilets in a public place. so dont tell me this John is fresh
after this verse, you should re try your words
cuz the last time u delivered dopeness.... he was my doctor for my birth
your a fucking idiot. your a homo and I exposed u in this battle
ppl say my wording sucks dick but John cant find MY WORDING in Seattle
you recycle ALOT old lines buddy, I know he's floored
his lines are like Karoake, saying old shit and makin em worse then b4
3:00 pm is when I pulled out the gun and shoot him in the chest
So, John 3:16 isn't the bibble passage, its around the time of his death
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Old 12-22-06, 02:44 AM   #7
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That's a keyword fellas, and Glocks needs another plan.
He isn't praying..
.. but he IS on his knees with his mouth open thankin another man.
You've won 9 straight, but ain't makin any clout.
I haven't seen a streak that easy..
.. since your mom and sister ran naked through my house
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
I don't know if your gay, but in this case, look at this shit.
I'll win, and this'll be a G-loss that'll mimic the shit you put on ya lips..
As far as wording goes, face it bitch, you suck with it.
Shit's scrambled so much.. Vince Young and Vick are hittin you up for tips.
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.
It's a loss for ya buddy, i don't mean to make ya world end.
But if you want another belt.. i left a couple of em' strapped to ya girls bed.

vs

no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never meet her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
Me and ya mom had good times in the past, shit was fate
n John Hensley taught me alot but atleast im learning from my mistakes
Mercules beat you! im 4-0 against him, your not a test
its like the toilets in a public place. so dont tell me this John is fresh
3:00 pm is when I pulled out the gun and shoot him in the chest
So, John 3:16 isn't the bibble passage, its around the time of his death

Good battle but John gets my votes on quotables. Both had tight verses though

V/ John Hensley
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Old 12-22-06, 10:07 AM   #8
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That's a keyword fellas, and Glocks needs another plan.
He isn't praying..
.. but he IS on his knees with his mouth open thankin another man.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.

vs

no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never met her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
after this verse, you should re try your words
cuz the last time u delivered dopeness.... he was my doctor for my birth
you recycle ALOT old lines buddy, I know he's floored
his lines are like Karoake, saying old shit and makin em worse then b4

This was a pretty one sided battle actually, I thought Hensely came with a really nice verse here with crisp wording and well executed concepts. Most of his quotables were dope and even the lines I didn't quote were pretty decent too. The second half of his verse was especially nice, and every line was solid at the least. Glocks on the other hand didn't come as I'd expect him too, with wording letting him down on several occasions. His main problem in this battle was that he didn't start well, with his first 3 punches off target. His quotables were nice but he didn't really maintain the consistency he has previously amounted in his past battles in the league. Overall Hensely came with a pretty dope verse and took this easily.

V/ John Hensley
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Old 12-22-06, 10:39 AM   #9
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You claim you AIN'T a rider, but you got a vain disorder.
Cuz you've been harassin my dick for so long it's filing a restrainin' order.
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..

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no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never meet her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
3:00 pm is when I pulled out the gun and shoot him in the chest
So, John 3:16 isn't the bibble passage, its around the time of his death

I liked this battle, both verses were drop but John's verses had bigger impact on me, and came harder in my opinion

V/ JH
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Old 12-22-06, 10:52 AM   #10
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That's a keyword fellas, and Glocks needs another plan.
He isn't praying..
.. but he IS on his knees with his mouth open thankin another man.
You've won 9 straight, but ain't makin any clout.
I haven't seen a streak that easy..
.. since your mom and sister ran naked through my house.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.
It's a loss for ya buddy, i don't mean to make ya world end.
But if you want another belt.. i left a couple of em' strapped to ya girls bed.

vs

no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never meet her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
after this verse, you should re try your words
cuz the last time u delivered dopeness.... he was my doctor for my birth
you recycle ALOT old lines buddy, I know he's floored
his lines are like Karoake, saying old shit and makin em worse then b4
3:00 pm is when I pulled out the gun and shoot him in the chest
So, John 3:16 isn't the bibble passage, its around the time of his death

glocks was mad inconsistent. his quotables were tight. but every bar apart from his quotables were fuckin whack. john dropped ill. nothin in his verse was weak. his quotables were all nice. he murdered glocks here.

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Old 12-22-06, 01:27 PM   #11
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That's a keyword fellas, and Glocks needs another plan.
He isn't praying..
.. but he IS on his knees with his mouth open thankin another man.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.

vs

no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never met her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
after this verse, you should re try your words
cuz the last time u delivered dopeness.... he was my doctor for my birth
you recycle ALOT old lines buddy, I know he's floored
his lines are like Karoake, saying old shit and makin em worse then b4


Yeah, lets be honest. Glocks finally ran out of steam and was taken pretty convincingly by Hensley here. He had a nice verse, but his consistency was not nearly as good as Hensley who just dropped his usual tightness and easily took this.

V/ - John Hensley
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Old 12-22-06, 08:17 PM   #12
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Lets brainstorm a second, your bitch wanted to pick my brains
but opinions are like assholes n I squashed ever idea ya girl threw my way
no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never meet her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
Me and ya mom had good times in the past, shit was fate
n John Hensley taught me alot but atleast im learning from my mistakes
Mercules beat you! im 4-0 against him, your not a test
its like the toilets in a public place. so dont tell me this John is fresh
3:00 pm is when I pulled out the gun and shoot him in the chest
So, John 3:16 isn't the bibble passage, its around the time of his death

vs.


You've won 9 straight, but ain't makin any clout.
I haven't seen a streak that easy..
.. since your mom and sister ran naked through my house.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
I don't know if your gay, but in this case, look at this shit.
I'll win, and this'll be a G-loss that'll mimic the shit you put on ya lips..
You claim you AIN'T a rider, but you got a vain disorder.
Cuz you've been harassin my dick for so long it's filing a restrainin' order.
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.
It's a loss for ya buddy, i don't mean to make ya world end.
But if you want another belt.. i left a couple of em' strapped to ya girls bed.

Overall/-This was a good battle,Roger Glocks had sum nice lines that were connecting well..but alot others that failed with shotty wording..but still were decent lines just not quote worthy..an JH came nice too an consistant too..I really wanted to not uote sum lines but they either made me say damn or laugh..quite witty,Ive seen sum concepts before but not done like he did them..so pretty fresh..good read.
props to both

V/-John Hens
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Old 12-22-06, 10:11 PM   #13
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That's a keyword fellas, and Glocks needs another plan.
He isn't praying..
.. but he IS on his knees with his mouth open thankin another man.
Lolz.. Cool
You've won 9 straight, but ain't makin any clout.
I haven't seen a streak that easy..
.. since your mom and sister ran naked through my house.
Meh.. Decent but wording was off.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
Lolz..
I don't know if your gay, but in this case, look at this shit.
I'll win, and this'll be a G-loss that'll mimic the shit you put on ya lips..
Lolz.. Creative
You claim you AIN'T a rider, but you got a vain disorder.
Cuz you've been harassin my dick for so long it's filing a restrainin' order.
Ok..
As far as wording goes, face it bitch, you suck with it.
Shit's scrambled so much.. Vince Young and Vick are hittin you up for tips.
Meh..
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
Lolz..
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
Ok..
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.
Re-wording would have made it better
It's a loss for ya buddy, i don't mean to make ya world end.
But if you want another belt.. i left a couple of em' strapped to ya girls bed.
Lolz.. Nice

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keep lyin ur ass off, you feel Glocks and u know im one of the best
cuz he's gonna beat Gun!....the game where u fight indians in the old west
Meh.. ok
Lets brainstorm a second, your bitch wanted to pick my brains
but opinions are like assholes n I squashed ever idea ya girl threw my way
Ok..
your gonna be freakin pissed u blew this battle, it's a mark on ur career
it's like we got visited by a Head coch in this battle...John Madden here
Nah..
no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never meet her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
Wprding was off.
Me and ya mom had good times in the past, shit was fate
n John Hensley taught me alot but atleast im learning from my mistakes
Ok..
Mercules beat you! im 4-0 against him, your not a test
its like the toilets in a public place. so dont tell me this John is fresh
Ok..
after this verse, you should re try your words
cuz the last time u delivered dopeness.... he was my doctor for my birth
No..
your a fucking idiot. your a homo and I exposed u in this battle
ppl say my wording sucks dick but John cant find MY WORDING in Seattle
Meh..
you recycle ALOT old lines buddy, I know he's floored
his lines are like Karoake, saying old shit and makin em worse then b4
No..
3:00 pm is when I pulled out the gun and shoot him in the chest
So, John 3:16 isn't the bibble passage, its around the time of his death
Meh.. Ok..

Ok cool battle here I have to say John came off fresh from the start & kept it going. Good shit Hensley. Glocks never saw your shit before but that was a pretty good verse here. John came off with alot more wittier concept's though & executed them nicely. Glocks you had some punche's that needed re-wording which was what threw you off. you also have to keep up with the consistency. So..

V - John Hensley
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Old 12-22-06, 10:25 PM   #14
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Way too many sexual disses in this battle from both of you, but some of them were funny. Hens, you had an all around solid verse. You had a few good lines, mixed in with alot of decent stuff. I did think that "under the tree" line was tight though, and the opener was good as well. One line that I found was worded awkwardly from you was the G-loss line. Its probably impossible to avoid because the concept forces you to call him by one letter of his name " G " loss, which sounds awkward in that context. Overall, not the best stuff I've seen from you, due to overabundance of girl disses, but it was a good read.

Glocks, on the other hand, made me laugh at his second bar. It was probably the concept, combined with a complete lack of subtlety in the wording that made me laugh. The opener was kind of lame though (and yes I do know what game Gun is), and Glocks' verse fell off a lot in the second half of it. Not nearly as consistant as hens, and didnt take advantage of one of hens more "meh" verses (which isnt to say it was a bad verse, cuz it wasnt... just that you'd normally be faced with an even tougher challenge)

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Old 12-23-06, 02:13 AM   #15
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That's a keyword fellas, and Glocks needs another plan.
He isn't praying..
.. but he IS on his knees with his mouth open thankin another man.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.

vs

no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never met her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
after this verse, you should re try your words
cuz the last time u delivered dopeness.... he was my doctor for my birth
you recycle ALOT old lines buddy, I know he's floored
his lines are like Karoake, saying old shit and makin em worse then b4


coo battle but oneside all the way, but both came good just john came better

V/JH
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