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07-16-05, 10:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Thug Passion '05
IP: DDC2 B2FB
{talkin}
yeaaaaaah, this goes out 2 my thug misses....u know tha real down ass chicks that's always gon ride no matter wut. u know who u are. this is 4 u check it out Affiliates through affection, my poetics penetrate with a passion a love drivin by natural highs as we both climax to satisfactoin physical attraction requires sexual action i'll make ya bed rock picture me pumpin up and down with motions fluid as jump shots us switching positions as pleasure and pain are deeply inflicted you're screamin louder and cryin as if dyin as a nigga shitfts it after it's over u claim u hate me........................ but that's a lie i say i love you and your heart melts........ i see it in your eyes you're taken by suprise. yet your reaction soon emplies........ that tha feeling is mutual......................i know u feelin me but for fear of bein hurt for some reason u won't reveal to me ............................how u feel inside, although i wanna know take a sip of this thug's passion baby and let ya thoughts go hook: (same as original{sung by some bitch i can't rememba tha name of}) {i heard it's tha bomb} {and u got it goin on} {give me some of your thug passion baby} {you got me drippin wet} {from tha way u make me sweat} {give me some of your thug passion baby}- etc is this tha beginnin of somethin? our conversations get deeper but it still seems like i gotta affectionately fight to reach her see she's not tha ordinary female........ that ass is to die for plus her lips is givin me hell, beggin me to just try more and see i can't blame anybody else for feelin baby girl's smile ma got beauty and booty with titties to drive a whole city wild but i'm deeper than that, to me all of that shit is irrelevant she's got incredible talent not to mention that she's inteligent one way to describe your beauty is that of a black queen i can invision u gigglin as i scheme to get u out ya gap jeans u got me beggin like a crack fiend............. with persistance praising your sillhouette as you walk off into the distant.... sunset your tounge's wet from a french kiss foreverlasting is this love that's wut i'm askin ........................................... ...........................................pissy drunk offa thug passion hook 3x
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07-16-05, 10:17 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: EA1A E1F0
pretty decent piece to me liked the multies the hook was coo structure was coo flow was right on point and you didn't kepp it simple 7.5/10 rtf in "I Aint Fuckin Wit Cha"
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07-16-05, 10:18 PM | #3 | |||||||
ready 4 wuteva
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
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07-16-05, 10:47 PM | #4 | |||||||
==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Yooo dis was nice cuzz! bringin back sum pac shyt, dats dope, good vocab, really complex throughout, u stuck to the same sorta rhyme scheme as pac on the original version 2, dats kool....u killed it, flow & vocab was off the hook cuzz! dope shyt
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07-16-05, 11:11 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: D6D7 B7E8
This was nice considering it's a thug piece. The multies were ok and the flow was good. Try to keep up with more than two syllables in rhymes.
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07-16-05, 11:50 PM | #6 | |||||||
ready 4 wuteva
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
thanks 4 tha tip mayn...i'll keep it in mind...uppin
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07-17-05, 12:49 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
uppin bitches......
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07-18-05, 12:12 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
uppin again beeeeeeatches
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07-19-05, 12:02 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
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07-20-05, 01:09 PM | #11 | |||||||
ready 4 wuteva
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
u-p-p.....i-n-g
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07-21-05, 10:16 PM | #12 | |||||||
ready 4 wuteva
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
uuuuuuuppppppppppp
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07-22-05, 12:16 AM | #13 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Flow silly with nobility like a king this type thing is royalty
Clings to loyalty when dealing with rap like Jackson, Latoya be Reading palms and proceeding calm with success not dumb Verses I be delivering them bold while shivering and cold from Snowfall my flow all ice but right and nice like white rice and rum No sense nagging it causes intense haggling like high prices Outrageous but advantageous to shop around town end the crisis Not dodging the doors where bargain galore with food make sacrifices |
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07-22-05, 08:02 PM | #14 | |||||||
ready 4 wuteva
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
^^ wuteva that means....i'm with it mayn......uppin
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