what did i say? 7 bars
no crew votes nuttin like at
just battlin yo
don't matta when ya verse is cuz after this ima catch up on some z's
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ey yo the first time we battled this bitch kinda beat me
but her name n her picture were kinda deceiving
so i called her man, when she really a lil slut
slobbin knobs, hand jobs, n gettin fucked in the butt
she like me n i know she chillen just anticipatin
on my rhymes like she do when she menstruatin
i ain't never heard of no girl rapper befo'
your lyrics n ya style needs just a lil mo
so get out the game! god damn you embarrassin
u like a allergy that won't go away, damn wheres my claratin
i figure you a lil white girl that tries ta act black
fake jersey dress, menolos, n NBA cap
so get tha fuck outta hurr, n smoke ya fake ass blunts
fore i make you bleed, but wait thats only once a month!

hur up dammit
shit can't think of nuttin cuz i destroyed u in this battle
vote mutha fuckas

wow im so happy that u no that women have periods
one of my punches is enough 2 make him delerious
u would have won if people knew what apollo was?
just so u know a horses live in a stable god ur dumb
r u serious i cant think of anythig because u destroyed me?
this comin from the kid who couldnt figure out grl meant she
we no u were talkin bout ur self when u said a slut who takes it in da butt
like the guy off scary movie the vaccuum is the only time he gets sucked
still dont get any votes ur shit was prewrote that y u said 14 lines
he used the theasaurus and his vocab still doesnt suepass mine
doesnt have any personals and his lines r still fucked fucked
basically u rhyme shittier than that g unit guy young buck
u cant beat me ur weak punches hit as hard as a three year old child
since were talkin about pms ur a pussy u cant take pain u need midol

supposed 2 be fucked up
my bad...................

Flow:tie
Punches:yte
Structure:tie
Vocab:Yte
overall:my vote goes to yte she just came harder..MC was pretty good too but knowing she was a girl and using it too much made u lose points.
ne wayz repay the favor and vote honestly on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...823#post1154823

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Ima give this to MCrepresenta, his flow was crazy!! yte grl you usually flowin of the hook guess you had a bad battle good luck to the both of you in upcommin battle maybe we can battle sometime.
AYY CAN YALL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE FO ME HERES THE LINK
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4975post1154975

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hmm....okay battle i gues....Mc came wack again...peep'd the last his wasnt too good either.....lacking punches man....werk on that ...you vocab's not bad niether is strucutre....flows Ok....metas are iight...not bad...personals...decent attempts.....
overall .. .you need some elevatin...but not too bad little elementary thats all 10/20

yte: better punches....your improving alot lately...vocab good...structure was good sum alittle stretched....personals were eh....wordplay was ok...but the thing that won was your punches were harder...more direct...good job on that....nice verse all in all
12/20

hit this upp with adequate feedback.....a good vote....honest too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112004

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yte got it, a female hitt'n harder god damn.

VOTE YTE, she got it home safe. Belee that, but battle me next though. stupid-yeah remember me.