aight this is a quick track i did today cuz i was bored
i wrote n recorded in a short amount of time..
but theres 3 verses n like 4 hooks...quality aint the best but give ur honest feed back
thanks..


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/hypnotistmusic.htm

listening to it right now, opening not bad. turned it off. lol its aight but u cna do betta, man its aight peace

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mad- skillz

dun be mad cuz u lost, your just another victimLyod banks
"lyod banks motha fucka, with a gun and a clip/
ready to smack up all those nigga's that running there lip"

Dude you sound a little whiney like Fred Durst or something. I'm just glad you didn't keep up that deepened synthesieed voice you had the begining. This might have sounded better with better sound quality... but that kind of killed it. I don't know if the WestCoast Gangsta style beat is a good choice for you man. You seemed to jump around on topics too for some reason.

Return the feed
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113941

i dont understand why u get the quality u get with ur setup... did u install the correct driver for the soundcard?? or are u adding bass on ur vocals?? kinda sounds like u adding bass.. flow was koo.. delivery was ok.. beat is koo.. but it does fit ur style.. but this shit overall is aiight.. step it up homie!

pz.

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thanks for all the feeback....if u need to drop a link for me to hit urs up...ill do it..i wanna see what people think about this track...thanks agian for the feedback....

keep upin please...