Verse One:

Im ahead of the world and staring through my rearview,
Its the underdog's time, time to make it through,
Thats what a thug is, the one deemed to be without hope,
But then takes the world by the neck and gives it a choke,
No one knows the shit he do when he gets a lil' older,
Hail him high and state his name a lil' more bolder,
He is the victim of bullying that shoots up your school,
He is the nigga that dont give a fuck if he is cool,
I know no fear apart from God, nothin can stop me,
I said it before Scarface and never give up like Rocky,
Im a thug with a hundred niggas right behind me,
Id fuckin kill you and then hide the body,
If I aint told u already im jus so grimey,
Packin heat in my pants im jus so lively,
Your death jus seems so damn timely,
Look at yo coffin jus so damn shiny....NIGGA


Verse Two:

From the AK to cocaine, Im a troubled nigga,
Another nigga dead here jus go fuckin figure,
The cops go blamin on the black man,
Cos nothin else to say thinkin im on crack man,
Racism still alive jus buried uder new world order,
Its bigger than even now im visitin the deporter,
Jus cos im black they think im different,
Str8 freestylin its my delivereance,
Brenda's got a baby but I dont give a fuck,
So does my mama but hopes for a misscariage with ne luck,
How she gonna raise her 10th kid up in the ghetto,
But i gotta bring home the cream like i was Corneto,
IM A MUTHAFUCKIN THUG NIGGA, INTER THE BEST,
YOU DONT THINK SO PUT INTER TO THE TEST

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uppin........

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199746

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uppin..............

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200043

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He is the victim of bullying that shoots up your school,
^see muhfuckahs dont be believin me when i tell them not to pick on them....i told yall they would shoot it up....


Brenda's got a baby but I dont give a fuck,
So does my mama but hopes for a misscariage with ne luck,
^wow...thats pretty deep mayne....

this was pretty str8 for a freestyle, loved the emotion in it....if its any truth in ya words i can respect that....and cant realli hate....i know some folks talk about theyre not fond of the thug talk pieces...but, if its whats real...then go for it.....

keep doing yu

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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::..
.Re-Writing The Re-Run.

straight tight man, nice for a freestyle, this is better than half of my written shit lol. yer, it flowed well throughtout ur whole piece which was gud. nice job 8.5/10

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hell if someone gave this cat a gun he'll shoot himself in the dang toe he '
s listening to tupac and them this shit is not pure thug at all and some of the facts is fucked up should've have to them rap on live interviews instead of songs 9YOU DIDN'T FOOL ME)

Why The Fuck Do You Do That...stop Freestylin In My Om's

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for a freestyle that was dope man

i mean i cant freestyle but the was tight..i like some of the points u made like the one about brenda got a baby...

overall this was probly a 8/10

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uppppin...........

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got a lot olf whack wannabe fucks on thwe internet and this is one of them cat never saw the ghetto

You dont know the next thing when it comes to me U FUCKIN WIGGA who doesnt know shit sits on his fat white boy wanna be black belly sayin shit thinkin he hard look man STOP BEEFIN WITH me cos I FUCKIN BEAT YO ASS


5 - 0 KNOCKOUT BITCH

So shhhhhhhh biatch

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