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Old 11-03-06, 02:52 PM   #1
Jay Rose
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Arrow new shit....freeverse check it

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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 11-03-06, 02:55 PM   #2
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wtf


dawwg its iek u emulated eminem there..do u have ur own style?

or any orginality at all?
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Old 11-03-06, 11:58 PM   #3
Jay Rose
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okay get past the first line, and listen, plus its a freeverse...plus i dont care what you think so whatever
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 11-04-06, 03:47 AM   #4
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u really do sound like em n shit but its coo aint ur fault but anyways beat choice is cool i like that shit.....ya flow seemd very smooth ya delivey is coo too lyrics n all that shit is propa.....the ony thing i wish it was a lil longer other than that gud shit dog =1=
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Old 11-04-06, 07:42 AM   #5
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lots of mothafuckas


haa

yea...a bit like EM with the voice

quality is nice...can I come use ur mic?

haaa

lyrics/flow/rhyming are decent...nothing dramatic either way...


keep em rollin man


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