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03-27-06, 11:48 PM | #1 | ||||
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How Im Feeling
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Link 2 Its Been Awhile Since I Been Here But I Think I Might Be Back But Who Knows I Could Be Gone Tommorow Anyways Heres Somthin I Wrote Money Dont Grow On Trees Yet Its The Root Of All Evil Its Funny Making Money Is The Soul Goal For Most People Just Wanna be Succsesful Never Helpful Its Crazy Man Amazingly Im Still Able To Write With Two Lazy Hands They Say I Paint Pictures With Words But Im Hearin A Blank Im Takin In All There 2 Cents, Storin Em In My Memory Bank Wasnt Meant To Make It Guess Ima Damiond In The Ruff Its Time To Be Tuff, Dont Need A Girl Hip Hops My Love Feels Like Yall Skippen Rocks Arcoss The River I Cryed Tryed To Brain Storm But My Heads Filled With Clear Skys No More Teared Eyes, Other Guys Is Actin Lies I Havent Got Any Answers So Im Done Askin Why Im On The Right Track But To Slow For This Fast Race And After All The Steps I Make I Still Come In Last Place I Guess Thats The Price I Pay For Bein The Nice Guy Practice Makes Perfect But Nobodys Perfect Why Try Strive For Perfection, Grab For Something We Cant Reach Its Myself Vs Me, Either Way Im Just Goin To Get Beat Tryin To Balance Music, School, And My Life My Shadows The Onlything Beside Me So Im Lonley At Night Layin Alone, I Conversate Between My Mind And My Heart They Argue But My Soul Intervens Everytime That They Start Trying To Reach The Destiny Of My Dreams, By Sleep Walkin I Speak In My Sleep, Dont Wake me Up Let me Keep Talkin Let Me Keep Thinkin Let Me Keep Happyness In My Dreams I Hate Reality Thats Why I Keep Rappin These Things Cause I Become What i Want When I Write Songs And Poems And I Know I Cant Give Up As Long As A Flow Em Leave me Some Feed Please
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03-28-06, 12:08 AM | #2 | ||||||
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damn you still have the touch man........nice creativity man, emotion and flow man...nice keep doing ur thing homes.........................i rate thi 8/10
nice flow to the concept!
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03-28-06, 09:27 PM | #3 | ||||
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Thanks For The Feed Homie, Hit Me Up With Somemore Please
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03-28-06, 10:58 PM | #4 | ||||
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hecks ya. This was nice and creative. And Deep as shit. Keep up the good work folk. 8.5/10
Everything was on point.
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03-28-06, 11:00 PM | #5 | ||||
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RTF OM in my sig plz.
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03-28-06, 11:05 PM | #6 | ||||
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Werd... Thanks For The Feed Homie And I Rtf Already...Uppin For Some More Feed
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03-29-06, 07:13 PM | #7 | ||||
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Come On Uppin For Some More Feed Ill Rtf
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03-30-06, 12:09 AM | #8 | |||||||
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hey this shit was raw had goose pumps racing up my arms like the rapids this shit was deep and just all there for me straight up pictured what you where trying to tell ppl good work and keep it up
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04-01-06, 12:31 AM | #9 | ||||
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Thanks For The Feedback Homie
Uppin For More Please
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04-02-06, 11:58 AM | #10 | ||||
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Uppin For Some God Damn Feed Back Please
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04-08-06, 11:40 AM | #11 | ||||
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Uppin For More More Feed
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04-12-06, 06:05 PM | #12 | |||||
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This was beautiful. The flow complimented the piece perfectly. Imagery, emotion, and metaphors were all there. My fav line:
Feels Like Yall Skippen Rocks Arcoss The River I Cryed Tryed To Brain Storm But My Heads Filled With Clear Skys Real good. I'd nominate it. Peace.
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04-13-06, 01:21 PM | #13 | ||||||
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word. nice piece, really liked the opener. u had some emotion in there which it is always important to throw some in there for any piece. really creative. word up and return the favor on any of my 2 oms.
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04-14-06, 01:27 PM | #14 | ||||
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Thanks For The Feed Homies And Yea It Would Be Awsome If You Did Nominate It
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04-14-06, 10:00 PM | #15 | ||||
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Uppin For More Feed
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