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Drop Dead has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-05 06:48 AM.

|..‘Rappin’ You In A Ball’, Dead’ll Enjoy Heavin’-Marks-Out-Tied,
Cuz My Punches “Pitch, Black” Without It ‘Bein’-Dark-Outside’..|
|..Like A Bat-Or-A-Vulture, I ‘Don’t Fly’ For Placs-Of-The-Culture,
So Punches Will “Chizzle Art, Form” Like ‘That-Of-A-Sculpture’..|
|..His ‘Spits Never Above Mine’… Just Between You-And-The-Uzi,
So You’ll “See Black Hawk, Down” Without ‘Viewin’-The-Movie’..|

Only Read If You Didn’t Get The Wordplay…
*Pitch Black = Very Dark.
**Sculpture = An Art Form Where You Chizzle.
***Hawk = When You Gather Spit/Saliva.

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Black Arts has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-05 10:45 AM.

Voted For: Drop Dead

the punches are pretty much even, nothin was really dope, both had a few decent punches, i'd say that drop dead had an edge tho
drop dead really wins this cause of his dope multis
he kept up the multis but still made sense wit his punches
the only one that i had to read the explanations for was the black HAWK down thing, but no hate on u for using good vocab

vote- drop dead


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Voted For: Drop Dead

Damn This Was a Good Battle Very Hard To Decide No Hate But Heres What I Think

Drop Dead
|..‘Rappin’ You In A Ball’, Dead’ll Enjoy Heavin’-Marks-Out-Tied,
Cuz My Punches “Pitch, Black” Without It ‘Bein’-Dark-Outside’..|
I Like The Wordplay But The punch wasnt all that to strong but the wordplay was tight

|..Like A Bat-Or-A-Vulture, I ‘Don’t Fly’ For Placs-Of-The-Culture,
So Punches Will “Chizzle Art, Form” Like ‘That-Of-A-Sculpture’..|
I Like this one Nice woprdplay and a Dope Punch

|..His ‘Spits Never Above Mine’… Just Between You-And-The-Uzi,
So You’ll “See Black Hawk, Down” Without ‘Viewin’-The-Movie’..|
The second line was Hot I Like That I Dint Get it at first I had to read it twice Nice

Overall i Think That You had a very good verse a dope verse at that and I like your wordplay mixture with the punchez Thats dope sort of my style .....lol../....But anyway I think That you deserve The win in this battle

Black Arts
Flow irritates like that bug you just can't get out your house
Drop Dead......................you took the words right out my mouth!!!!
The first line was wack but the second line was aii
This nigga's flows ain't accepted, shit's rejected
Couldn't come across as ill if you rhymebook went septic
LOl made me laugh my ass off Nice
Faggot.......oops where my manners homosexuals have rights too
Nigga's hated, you flow so wack even your rhymes spite you
again Second line was tight but the first ...Yea ....

Overall I think taht you donnot deserve the win in this battle bcuz >OVERALL< drop dead came betta than you in certain and important areas so thats why I couldnt give you the win so dont hate man your shit is tight jus try to strike in more impoartant areas next time

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Voted For: Black Arts

i vote for black arts cuz his rhymez were short and sweet whereas Drop Dead u had to think for a bit...plus black arts had some personal punches and drop dead didnt have much he was more focused on himself nd all

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Voted For: Black Arts

blackarts-your verse was short but sweet...your punches were intact, you had good personals...and good detailed punches in ur verse...your vocab was iight....i feel you had a better verse.overall 5/10

DropDead-Your verse was aggrivatin man....i hate those accent marks..you needa chill wit them....never does it enhance your verse...your verse lacked punches, they had them yet not attacking your opponent enough..your personals werent appealing, just straight up didnt feel it....overall 4/10

v/black arts

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Voted For: Drop Dead

Flow irritates like that bug you just can't get out your house
Drop Dead......................you took the words right out my mouth!!!!
weak

This nigga's flows ain't accepted, shit's rejected
Couldn't come across as ill if you rhymebook went septic
nice feeling that,

Faggot.......oops where my manners homosexuals have rights too
Nigga's hated, you flow so wack even your rhymes spite you
not a good ending,

all around you had only 1 good bar, 5/10


|..‘Rappin’ You In A Ball’, Dead’ll Enjoy Heavin’-Marks-Out-Tied,
Cuz My Punches “Pitch, Black” Without It ‘Bein’-Dark-Outside’..|
punch is stupid not directed to him and wit-less....

|..Like A Bat-Or-A-Vulture, I ‘Don’t Fly’ For Placs-Of-The-Culture,
So Punches Will “Chizzle Art, Form” Like ‘That-Of-A-Sculpture’..|
ok now thats a little better

|..His ‘Spits Never Above Mine’… Just Between You-And-The-Uzi,
So You’ll “See Black Hawk, Down” Without ‘Viewin’-The-Movie’..|

again to much word-play if fucking ya verse up but it was aight, you bearly get my vote take it easy on the word-play dont force it....

6/10

Voted For: Drop Dead

this was a good battle, i liked reading this, i am definatly going with drop dead hands down, punches and wordplay were on point, he had structure good so each line fit nicly, good battle both of you....

punches:drop dead
wordplay:drop dead
personal:drop dead
consistancy:drop dead
overall:drop dead

winner:drop dead

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