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Old 07-23-04, 02:54 AM   #16
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Good battle

If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings...
Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz ....
weak personal
NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards....
Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward....
Weak
Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless...
Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless..
Multies don't hide a weak punch
The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket....
Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic...
Ok setup had me expecting a hard punch but u dropped another weak one
Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners...
Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender??...
Ok finally a decent line
Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable....
Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol....
Kinda funny decent closer

Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick
Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick?
Kinda wack opener but I see the direction u were going in
My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed
You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ
Solid personal
You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite
Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite
Good personal again
My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss
At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss
Weak
You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July"
But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie
decent punch
Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile
I mean, yo punches make less sense, than yo stupid title "etile"
Nice closer

Not a close battle at all spul took it wit his personals an closer, polifick didn't drop hard enuff in this one, biggups to both y'all but spul to it....

Vote: Spul
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Old 07-23-04, 03:02 AM   #17
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ok, tight. uppin' this. 4-4
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Old 07-23-04, 01:12 PM   #18
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good battle but a shock for me here...

spul came quite nice wiv gud personals and nice flow n punches but i thought some of ya punches cud have hit harder than they did, didnt really feel the opener although it was an o.k personal....

8/10

polifick....thought you came real tight here, probably the best i've seen from u, tight punches (liked the contender line) gud flow n complexity to ur verse, gud vocab and some nice wordplay, thought you tried harder on this one n it showed in my opinion...

peace n props to both but my vote goes to...

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Old 07-23-04, 01:56 PM   #19
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Old 07-23-04, 02:42 PM   #20
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Structure: Spul
Flow: both
enjoyed: both
came harder: polifick
punches: polifick
personals: polifick
closer; spul
openor: both
vote: polifick

close battle but I give it to polifick
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Old 07-23-04, 02:48 PM   #21
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reopened ...5 to 4 for polifick...votes uppin
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Old 07-23-04, 08:27 PM   #22
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Polifick...Your Stuff didnt make sense and The ones that did
was Dope as hell and nice Good Overall punches..Structure
was good but Wordplay Lacked of Flow

Spul-You had a Orginal Verse and Good But Since you had more
Orginal Verse and some of his didnt make sence you took it.
Because His lines was Dope as hell exsept for the ones and
you had a orginal verse and more that where orginal and the
last was funny So

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Old 07-23-04, 08:51 PM   #23
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Polifick- you have deffintly come better then this and i really didnt like the fact that you had to have the deffintion and everything else before your verse because that just makes it look really noobish....your punches was okay and your flow was good the only thing that was bad was that shit at the begining.


SPul-aswell as you i have seen you come better aswell.....i felt that your verse was slightly better then Polly's because your punches hit harder and your verse was more witty.....thas all i gotta say
 
Old 07-23-04, 08:56 PM   #24
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ok 6-5 me. uppin'
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Old 07-24-04, 03:27 AM   #25
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uppin for more votes people...let's get some...
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Old 07-24-04, 07:03 PM   #26
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If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings...
Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz ....
soso
NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards....
Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward....
funny but not hard
Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless...
Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless..
nice multies
The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket....
Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic...
first line is aight
Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners...
Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender??...
lmao at the first part
Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable....
Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol....
decent but not hard hitting


Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick (a growth or shit like that)
Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick?
decent punch
My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed
You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ
lol nice personal second one
You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite
Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite
lmao nice punch
My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss
At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss
not hard hitting
You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July"
But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie
soso
Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile
blah not hard hitting

vote spul
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Old 07-24-04, 07:16 PM   #27
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damn, finally this shit's over. 7-5 me
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Old 07-25-04, 01:30 PM   #28
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If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings...
Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz .
^no...
...
NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards....
Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward...
^decent
.
Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless...
Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless..
^not feelin' it...

The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket....
Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic...
^no...

Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners...
Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender??
^no...
...
Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable....
Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol....
^atleast a personal...hard-hittin'?..no


Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick (a growth or shit like that)
Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick?
^looked like u were headin' sumwhere...then the 2nd line...i dunno?...worded horribly...and not hard-hittin'

My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed
You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ
^first line was gay and totally destroyed any chance of this becomin' a decent punch

You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite
Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite
^decent...atleast it's a personal

My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss
At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss
^first line was gay....ruined the whole thing

You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July"
But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie
^doesn't seem like ur merkin' him so far...

Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile
I mean, yo punches make less sense, than yo stupid title "etile" (Elite fadin' back)
^horrible...wtf were u thinkin' when u typed that 2nd line?

Overall: Spul did have the personals but did not use them effectively...his verse was worded horribly to have hard-hittin' punches...Polifick didn't do much better either...but overall...his verse maintained a steady level of "no's"...Spul on the other hand had some..."Decent"...but mostly horrible lines...weak metaphors ruin lines.

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Old 07-25-04, 03:35 PM   #29
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^yea, battles already done.
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Old 07-25-04, 07:46 PM   #30
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Spul- nice verse came nice with the personals and your verse was nice
your punches were solid as well so in total this was nice shit you had
some Original concepts in your verse aswell

PoLifick- another nice drop you had the punches and personals
aswell i think you came a little harder in your drop so im gonna
go with Po it was about even good shit from both

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