Yo D....

Aight check this

AIght Daclassic this is the guy ive seen come close to ur skill that youve battled since VanGo and aheem Myself nah just playin...

Authentik.. I mean you threw in punches but they werent that good and some made no sense at all you dont wanna compare someone to a rappper.. that aint good.. just work on them

Daclassic yo nice verse kinda spetn a while on explaining this cat aint real but its good good multies to.. thats always a plus ...

Authentik...7/10
Daclassic...7.1/10

CLOSE... Vote Daclassic

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yeah that dude posted his verse first....so he i didnt really have to go all out on him....he ain't smart....he should of came harder than that

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Blue Print

B.P.

the winner is daclassic for an over-all more impressive drop
the punches, ryhme scheme, vocab, and damn near every aspect was superior here
my fav line=closer
"I'll place you on an escalator, Just to get you some elevation
So here is your eviction notice, think of a relocation"

authentik it was not horrible, but it was horrible by comparison
just use more creativity, like multies, or metas, and harder punches

peace

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

Damn Nasty Flow Classic Real Nice
Punchlines -8/10
Format/9/10
Wordplay 7/10
Needless To Say You Took It
Now Authentic-you Got Talent You Just Need Some Format To Better Observe What Your Sayin And Step Back And Take A Asec To Tweek It Like A Mixdown For A Final Copy Before Sending It .
Vote-classic

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Authentik took dis one.
I prefered his rhymin style

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