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Old 09-24-06, 04:59 PM   #1
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Verse 5

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Yo this, Venom'll, knock you off ya pedastool
You get shivers anytime i drop incredible
If you aint fellin this, i will insist, you still admit
Im spillin shit, illa than most cats with skill and it,
Aint a thang, for me drop at a rate the the same
As, chingy, 50, buck or lets say a game
But honestly i'd rather, not go backwords
I'd rather rap with the talent of Hov or mathers
As i gather the brainpower, needed to rain showers
Of rhymes and at time i need it to maim cowards
Either die or resign im weeded and drank sour
Mash, biddin my time, no reason to wait hours
Pass, Plus i battle with wit, spit shit that'll inflict
Fear in ya heart, and'll prolly rattle ya clique
Im outfitted to plow critics, wont get outwitted
And i cant describe the way my style shitted,
All over these hoes that pose as no threat
If i go first it'll make my foes sweat
And i smoke mad buddah, to last through the,
Vernacular, while you lack loot i relax to a
Spectacular, faded state, while you sulk and playa hate
You say i wont make it, shit, i say its fate.
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Old 09-24-06, 08:14 PM   #2
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nice drop homie everything look on point 2 me but wut the hell is vernacular man? n im not bien a hata i seriously dont kno so dont front...peep my lyrical hustla link in my sig
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Old 09-25-06, 08:52 AM   #3
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Dopeness fams !! like the change up in flow,... nice vocab,..

top bar:
Pass, Plus i battle with wit, spit shit that'll inflict
Fear in ya heart, and'll prolly rattle ya clique
^Dope^

P.s Vernacular = Lingo, Language

Stay up Anx

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Old 09-26-06, 12:00 PM   #4
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this joint was tight shawty, i was feelin the way you carried over bar after bar that was pretty gully. it keep me readin it. Erething in the joint was nice.

As i gather the brainpower, needed to rain showers
Of rhymes and at time i need it to maim cowards
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That was my fav bar outta the thing.
hit me back on my shit.......be easy
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Old 09-26-06, 08:46 PM   #5
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haven't seen you in awhile there ajax, You still got it though. flow was on point and the storyline was there. just some shit I'd like to hear on a song. overall decetn drop keep doin it. 1
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Old 09-27-06, 02:09 AM   #6
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illy drop mayne

"All over these hoes that pose as no threat
If i go first it'll make my foes sweat
And i smoke mad buddah, to last through the,
Vernacular, while you lack loot i relax to a"

haha, i'd love hearin this on a audio...it'd be dope fa'real.
keep tha skill goin folk
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Old 09-28-06, 01:05 PM   #7
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Word im gonna record a bunch of open mics to songs once i get my comp and mic for christmas. Thanks for the feed back.
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