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09-24-06, 04:59 PM | #1 | |||||
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Verse 5
IP: 814F AD48
Yo this, Venom'll, knock you off ya pedastool
You get shivers anytime i drop incredible If you aint fellin this, i will insist, you still admit Im spillin shit, illa than most cats with skill and it, Aint a thang, for me drop at a rate the the same As, chingy, 50, buck or lets say a game But honestly i'd rather, not go backwords I'd rather rap with the talent of Hov or mathers As i gather the brainpower, needed to rain showers Of rhymes and at time i need it to maim cowards Either die or resign im weeded and drank sour Mash, biddin my time, no reason to wait hours Pass, Plus i battle with wit, spit shit that'll inflict Fear in ya heart, and'll prolly rattle ya clique Im outfitted to plow critics, wont get outwitted And i cant describe the way my style shitted, All over these hoes that pose as no threat If i go first it'll make my foes sweat And i smoke mad buddah, to last through the, Vernacular, while you lack loot i relax to a Spectacular, faded state, while you sulk and playa hate You say i wont make it, shit, i say its fate. |
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09-24-06, 08:14 PM | #2 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 666A 5381
nice drop homie everything look on point 2 me but wut the hell is vernacular man? n im not bien a hata i seriously dont kno so dont front...peep my lyrical hustla link in my sig
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09-25-06, 08:52 AM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 860D ECBB
Dopeness fams !! like the change up in flow,... nice vocab,..
top bar: Pass, Plus i battle with wit, spit shit that'll inflict Fear in ya heart, and'll prolly rattle ya clique ^Dope^ P.s Vernacular = Lingo, Language Stay up Anx 1~ |
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09-26-06, 12:00 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
this joint was tight shawty, i was feelin the way you carried over bar after bar that was pretty gully. it keep me readin it. Erething in the joint was nice.
As i gather the brainpower, needed to rain showers Of rhymes and at time i need it to maim cowards ^^^ That was my fav bar outta the thing. hit me back on my shit.......be easy |
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09-26-06, 08:46 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 2372 BC06
haven't seen you in awhile there ajax, You still got it though. flow was on point and the storyline was there. just some shit I'd like to hear on a song. overall decetn drop keep doin it. 1
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09-27-06, 02:09 AM | #6 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 9FE7 5A18
illy drop mayne
"All over these hoes that pose as no threat If i go first it'll make my foes sweat And i smoke mad buddah, to last through the, Vernacular, while you lack loot i relax to a" haha, i'd love hearin this on a audio...it'd be dope fa'real. keep tha skill goin folk
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09-28-06, 01:05 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 814F AD48
Word im gonna record a bunch of open mics to songs once i get my comp and mic for christmas. Thanks for the feed back.
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