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Originally Posted by Premanition Shit forgot all about this, im off out in 5 mins so i'll key somethin real quik...pz Knight of the roundtable? uncredited label, remove the legs make it unstable inhalation nasal,-> ur bullshit a fictional fable, electrifyin like insulated cable (lol) decent i like the bar Ur potential is inter-contenental, cos any country claimin u is clearly mental turn away wen ya pens-full, dope lines rent-some cos daz ur rhymes went-dull nah...not digging this U 'cleaned' up ur act, matter of fact any punches lyin around got straight up vacced ur image cracked, bags our packed, lyrics lacked with muted tracks.... .................................................. ...........bitch turn ur back cos thats a rap

aiight considering this is the contendership match imma break this down...BIg..prolly the best vote you'll ever see.....Peep game

Its legibly unimaginable, mathematically incalculable, inextricably infallible,
Morally insurmountable, get the point..! you winnin is fuckin utterly impossible,
aiight good use of vocab..you sounded sort of like a nerd on this opener..but overall the vocab and the double multi's brought this out Dope...im wondering if you used a dictionary..lmfao anywayz...you had......3 Sets of multi's which also ups your Percentage for this line...lmfao the second part was aiight too...i consider it more of a filler though....it would of flowed better if you didnt say "FUCKIN" uttely impossible..but other than that this was hot..you had 2 sets of multi's in this line..and they both were double Multi's so imma give this a 9/10

a pranksta at last, ill turn gansta on ya ass .......& its all thanksta-the-cash,
you a wanksta’s-gash, its like I split ya lips........ cuz I just shanked-ya-ass,
Umm..the first line doesnt make sense...you basically said....you'll turn gangsta on his ass because of the cash? that doesnt make sense...it accually would be the less cash the more gangsta? right? but blah...this line was dope anywayz..good triple Multi's on this one and you had 3 sets of multi's so this was also a dope line....not your best because it didnt make sense..if it did...it would been fire..second line...the second line is dope..if your thinkin what im thinkin....was that wordplay? im takin it as a yes becuase your an intelligent dude..but the split ya lips..cuz i jus shanked ya ass..by that you mean he spits like shit...so you split his lipss? if soo good use of vocab on this one .. 7/10

dawg u’re muzzled breed, you bite with ease ..........like a subtle disease,
fuck these troubled leagues, cuz you wouldnt get the win if you doubled v's,
The first line was dope in my opinion..shit had a good flow....good use of Vocab..like alwayz......your a very skilled battle..dont think you should quit this league but blah....you had 3 sets of multi's and they were double multi's shit was koo...second line...was HOT..shit took me a second to get it but that shit was flames....decent shit dawg...i was feelin dat... 8/10

Overall this was a hot battle...your structure, vocab, and multi usage really makes you stand out in this battle...hot shit dawg......if you win you will be comin back for the championship right? hopefully you will......your flow was dope too.......you racked up a score of

24/30

Prem:

Knight of the roundtable? uncredited label, remove the legs make it unstable
inhalation nasal,-> ur bullshit a fictional fable, electrifyin like insulated cable (lol)
HOLY SHIT this was fuckin fire...dayum..the first line was hot......good wordplay and good punch with the roundtable..what really made it stand out was it all flowed solid ..plus it all equalled up to a punch...this was one of the hottest multi's ive seen in this league...you had 3 sets of multi's in the first line...second line..was also hot..inhalation nasal..line was dope too...and good use of multi's this shit is straight fire..good simile aswell...you had 3 sets of multi's in this line too..i give this a 10/10

Ur potential is inter-contenental, cos any country claimin u is clearly mental
turn away wen ya pens-full, dope lines rent-some cos daz ur rhymes went-dull
Dayum again good punch on the first line...........shit was hot and flowed nicely...its nice how he manages to use alot of multi's but make it tie all together nicely.....shit was hot..you had 2 sets of multi's........second line was pretty hot aswell...i was feelin it..good punch..wordplay.....and good multi's which is what its based about.....so overall i give this 8.5/10

U 'cleaned' up ur act, matter of fact any punches lyin around got straight up vacced
ur image cracked, bags our packed, lyrics lacked with muted tracks....
.................................................. ...........bitch turn ur back cos thats a rap
DAYUMMMM second line really murdered this shit...good closer dawg....it made sense and it was fuckin hot..mayn this was by far the hottest shit ive ever seen...you had 9 multi's in that bar..shit was off the hook...good flow aswell...and good wordplay on the first line....umm i personally accept all the dots.. on the second line..its like the grand finale type shit..only some people would understand that because i get shitted on if i do that..but this was hot.....9.5/10

overall mayn that was a fire verse.....your punches really increased your chances of winning,..and your flow was hot....vocab was hot too....this shit was just steaming with multi's.....you had a couple of simile's in there.....good verse dawg.....you equalled the amount of lines too ..so good sportmanship...you rack up a total amount of 28/30


[b]Conclusion

Both had hot verses but there can only be one winner....i added up the points and prem edges him out by a few points......Daz your vocab was off the hook..and good witty lines and structure..and of course multi's.......Prem you also had good multi's and dope vocab and better wordplay.......overall this is the hottest battle..and will be put into the hall of fame....

vote: Premanition

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K.ontroverz.Y
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A.uthentik I.ntelligence
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..Audio King Of Rv..


A.uthentik I.ntelligence
..Forever..