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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

checkin in...what you say slick 16 lines?

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I forgot to sign out for this week, but fuck 16 man....10 will be ok, no guarantees I will post but I will try and most likely will just to avoid a no-show

This Kid's Wack, Watch, See Him Exposed
We Givin Slick A Different Aspect To Lost.....
....Like Coming Aside The NBC Show!!
You Old News Kid, We're Done With History
It's Like This Kid Had An Abortion...
...The Way I Just Killed His Delivery!!
I'm Laughin This Through, Put You In Your Place
No One Looks Up To This Fo Knee...
....Til Mine Hits Him In The Face!!
Kid, I'll Murder You, Leave Nothing But Bones
Slick Like People To Come Through The Back...
....And I Ain't Talking Bout His Home!!
Said He'll Probably No-Show, I've Lost Patience
But Said He'll Probably Still-Drop
Like Kids With A Case Of Constipation!!

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c'mon homie, i don't want this shit to be a no show? anybody who's opponent no showed wanna drop a verse against this for the hell of it

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that had terrible structure...alot of bars where forced, setup lines didnt go with punch...alot of mixture goin on here, none where actually even punches,well not good ones, work on better concepts and droppin dope shit on it.hint: an actual punch.

structure is good, learn how to read it homie. bars weren't forced, maybe one was but you must not know of metaphors. only one bar wasn't a punch, so learn your basics first before you come critizise my shit cause your mad you didn't win over hotshh

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actually im not mad that i didnt win cuz i've beat him before.

and please ask anybody that structure is terrible,and yea but ya punches are weak,and yes i can read...maybe you need to step ya game up and stop battling nubs. cuz you're not good..trust me

ok kid, i battled anybody that accepts a callout, ask hotshh. i'm not even gonna waste time on you....w/e

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^w/e all you're wins are from nubs..that dont even have more wins than loses.and dont lie cuz i check 'em out and ya loss is from hotshh KOing you kid. i've got a win on him. ya wack kid, like i said step ya game up.and dont talk shit back to me when you havent even been here longer than a year, let alone month.

lol, i would have beaten him then got closed i recycled one bar. everyone had said i beat him. i've been here for over a year......you just don't know how you tard face

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you just don't know how you tard face


^ok you said like a tard that makes no sense.

i think both of you arent very good, then again im only a noob right?

whats the big deal i mean?
whats the difference between a noob and a vet??

ANSWER:
just about 1,000 to 5,000 post....

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NOT TO BE FUCKED WITH!!!!

i think your not that good, i ko'ed you....plus i was teaching you how to do topicals

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