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03-28-03, 04:41 PM
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Tell me what y'all think
IP:
I'm new at this. Just tell me waht ya think. I like constructive criticism, so if u need to rip me a new one.
Even if you are anebriated You better stop me now dog before I start hatin' When I'm spittin' these rhymes you can't catch me Standin' ova there like a black Joe Pesci Queer, Homo, Bitch ass Fag Your just like ya motha all you do is nag Your not even on the same pedestal as me Just wait and see who's the better mc I'll take out my 12 gauge and take out all my rage Leave you in a stage of blood and gore Tell your mother to come getcha' off the floor But I don't want nothin' to do with that dirty ass whore Ambulance pick you up and sayin we got a D.O.A. Another guy sayin' you need clinic aid "Cause I never liked you and I never will And that's why I shot you on the ground so you can lay still. It's kinda corny but i just came up with it. Peace out |
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03-29-03, 04:06 PM
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IP:
WOT THA FUKKS A D.O.A
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03-29-03, 04:58 PM
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IP:
it ain't bad, I can tell you that shiz ain't corny
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03-31-03, 09:59 AM
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IP:
D.O.A. = dean on arivial i presume. yeh it ain't bad. keep it up
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03-31-03, 10:00 AM
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IP:
sorry bout that last post D.O.A. Dead On Arivial
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