technician
Who you think you are I drop the Bombz around here ......
tHE 15 minute time limit got this kid sweatin in fear ....
6/10

Another IJL victim ... I just Ko'd theunderated earlier ....
Now we got another challenger & he he actin gurlyier!....
5/10

Cant even come with a decent punch .... I believe my hunch
Beat you like theres 12 months ... a garuntee like phille makes them blunts
6/10

Truth is you'll get smoked like the herb that you really are ....
You bore people to sleep like you actually spit Sealy bars ...
6/10

Weapon of Mass Destruction but your sig lies to Rb's eyes.....
U aint nothin but consumption & addition to -Technician-'s pride
7/10

overall 30/50


bombz
Hit with full destruct, struct you once, and already your stuck,Forever ya' clutched,
5/10

bruised lyricaly, used the bible and prayed to god,still couldn't win this miracally,
5/10

runnin' into a plague of black death, facts is left but the acts of an ax to ya' head,
pack of max flow, couldn't move me, thought it was facts? couldn't prove to be raw
5/10

will skillz, 15 mins with 10 lines these laws I kill, ruthless I don't care, I leave you flat
without a spare, clear and said, get near dread the scare of a pussy niggah who
6/10

dared, so wheres the truth? Since youth I known, your act of cockiness and talent is
all talk, cuz I don't see where its shown..
5/10

overall 26/50



plz dorp an homest vote in my sig, the battle

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yo tech got this he came harder in punches and flow.... he had nicwe wordpaly..bombz u came ight but ur shit was too strenched that messed
up ur flow really bad and ur wordplay was decent along wit ur punches
but they needed to be harder and they wasnt..so tech gets this..

Vote:tech...

can u drop an honest vote on this its 4-0
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111122

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wak battle seen batter from both...
v- tech(good structure and flow...your punches were disapointing,
none rly hit hard...nice persoanls tho...seen alot better man),
bombz(i swear your like 2 pll man always cum pout with new structure and this was wak
streched and shit, also no clear punches just a mess,you can cum so much harder man wats up?)
not a gd battle but tech gets it with clear punches and better struucture,

tech make sure you hit this with an honest vote now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110695 thx alot..........pz

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make sure you hit that link man.....thx.............


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho.............. pz

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damn upmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnn

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still upn............................................... .................................

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get this shit closed Damnit............................................ ....dq me for uppin too much if u want like youngblood....i give no fuckz

Dope...
Good punches
Flow was straight
Structure was good..
Wordplay was decent
Multies were lacked...
Overeall.....13/20




...Flow was weird
Multies was tried..
Structure was gone to hell
Writtin like it was for audio..?
Idk... verse needs work...
Overall.......7/20


V/-Technician-

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