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Old 05-11-04, 05:34 PM   #1
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Terrified Tears

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What do I do....
when your gone from me in the skys above my head
slowly salty tears of mine began to shed
What do I do....
when i wake up sweating screaming and began to cry
with flashbacks every moment with undelightness in my eyes
What do i do ...
when i'm scared and all my thoughts circle to you
wanting to be refreshed with all the things you would do
What do I do...
when i drown ears out speaking your name
and everyone gets tired of it and i feel so much shame
What do I do...
when i visit your grave and i break down not wanting to leave
because i can't stop thinking of you nor greive
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Old 05-12-04, 04:11 PM   #2
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yo yu should of made it longer it was a good poem but i didnt like the way it ended keep droppin
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