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Old 06-06-04, 05:22 PM   #1
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Make fame through Image, most claim in vengance
Blacks blame descendants, from slaves to plantiffs, defendants
I exchange the hatred within it, and explain in tainted pigment
The pain we experience, in this heinous period
Racists made these fences, mistaken, we maintain restriction
Gaining independence? Nah, its just faded fiction
My race is painted, printed..as a stain thats priviledged
To even be considered..in this raging system
I want to hang the figures, from Jim Crow to Hitler
To Castro and even Bush..whose positioned on pillars
Reigning as stealers...of lives...saying their givers
Please, degrading our life...slaying as killers
Debating the fight, you faggots waiving our rights
But making rights for faggots re-arranging our eyes
Wish I could switch and disguise..be a bitch dats deprived
But there's a hint in the sky..that keeps me depending on pride
So my intentions to write..emotions held within sentence
Its potent this poet has written...promoting this Image..

My Links are being retarded right now, so I replied to Ohweeeeeh Sex Song and Suicide by..that other person. I just forgot the name that quick.

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Old 06-06-04, 09:22 PM   #2
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I liked this...it was cool and steady
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Old 06-07-04, 09:04 AM   #3
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it was pretty good but ur still a rookie so i was feelin it keep elevatin.................................
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Old 06-07-04, 12:13 PM   #4
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that was sum deep shit man, i felt it. good rhyme scheme too lol.
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Old 06-08-04, 06:14 AM   #5
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Im no rookie, but yea thanks.
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