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08-13-06, 12:16 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Tony Green Presents ~Disciple~
IP: DA61 F08B
yeah yeaah peeps finally figured out how to up my quality now ur boy is a true beast the real rv rookie of the year is here.......
"Disciple" Links 1. http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=7 will post 2nd asap keep it open willa thanxx love ya |
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08-13-06, 12:29 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 2F55 6DD1
nice man.. liked this shit.... it feels like.. there a lil bit of static..but not really..unless its my speaker or soemthing? idk haha but anyways..good shit, liked the lyrics..the hook was tight..keep it up
*where im from*
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08-13-06, 02:03 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
your flow is off a little bit and your quality doesnt really sound that good right now
also you should turn the volume off the beat down a little bit and up your volume like the 3rd verse best btw
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08-13-06, 09:39 PM
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Put Yo Money On Me
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IP: CB5F 7EEE
Quality doesn't sound that good...you sound boring on tha track...2nd verse is coo. I don't really like the hook. It's too energetic and then the verses aren't. This isn't your best track in my opinion...Just ight. Too much gun talk. Unless you really know tha dude, he lives in your area, or you made real contact with him, gun talk is irrelevant...But, okay song.
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08-13-06, 09:48 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: DA61 F08B
Thanxx fo the feed
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08-14-06, 12:09 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 373D A1A5
ight the sample at the begioning is cool beat comes in i think i heard this beat before
beat needs to be lowered a bit delivery is aight jus needs to be upped maybe its cuz the beat to loud flows off in a few spots adlibs is aight hook needs a lil work lyrics is decent word ya verses need to be mixed but jus not on cool edit....overall u would sound way better if shit was mixed and vocals were compressed....holla at me some time ....welcome to skm word |
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08-14-06, 12:16 AM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: DA61 F08B
Thanxx fam-o and yeah we gone get on this thou Nok Out Kingz/SKM how we get down
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08-14-06, 01:54 AM
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IP: C7F6 C148
Listen'n like the openin intro...
Beat is ok... 1st: Cant really hear u my dude u sound muffled...Flow is a lil choppy...lyrics cool lacked emotion...delivery was okay HOoK: I didnt like...man i dont know it lacked emotion that raw shit..feel me.? all though i liked the dog barking in the background that was dope 2nd: was a lil better than the first...it sounded clear...delivery was better to me it started to sound like u was gettin that confidence... HOok: Same 3rd: Balances it out..yo for real...u came off better on this one not enough energy on the other 2...but good shit.. Over-all Dog it coulda bin mixed better an beat turned down some..if not turn the beat down then turn the vocals up it woulda sounded a lot better..hook was weak but energy was crazy....ive' heard better shit from u before...but other than that i dont see anything else wrong...keep it up kid hope to see more drops from u....my ratin 4.5/10 holla back..1 
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08-14-06, 10:00 AM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: DA61 F08B
Thanxx man still uppin
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08-25-06, 04:48 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 95FF 1D86
your flow is pretty decent man, needs some work but still decent, hook could use more energy, overall the track is not bad, and lol ur quality aint that good either haha. my bad for taking so long to peep i work full time
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