Alright--same rules 10 min 20 max---

Due.. Wed.......
Topic.....A clock...a bed--a window--"a human"............Time-----

Good luck with this one---please use some sort of symbolism for each word i used.....the main factors should be the things above

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i'm in.............quite difficult but i will thinkof something

er...yeah, sounds 'interesting'..(!)....

Just gonna say Deacon, i'm gonna be busy for a while...so is there any chance you could extend the deadline. Like till the end of next saturday. Cos then i'll have a day to properly do it. You know, do a couple of quick drafts on a weekday (10 mins on weekdays, and only 2 days free for that too..)...and then a day to just do it up properly.

alright deadlines are changed for sat..

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aight cool

very good topic....
this is when both should came strong...this kind of topic would make a very good masterpiece....

ill be round here waitin to read ur poems...

u can do it guys! good luck!

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- That's a Fact - </center>

could i ask why mine and
tik's competition is closed...
let me know...consider this
the check in...

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^^Tis now open, Sand...

And Shiznit, with it being so no specific, it makes it both harder ad easier...

...and thanks for the added pressure...(!)..

..well i guess i should start now. But, er...i'll stick to me tournament thing of doing it on my way home late at night...er..yeah..

i am ready to post........whenever you are Verentao

What the frig?! I've just started tonight, for like 30mins, and i only done my first stanza, which io probably wont keep!!..

Be patient, got till end of Saturday..

i know just let me know i get anxious that's all

Heh, no problem...i'll probably leave finish it in the last minutes of Saturday...but yeah, i'll post first...i'll hit you up on PM if you want...to tell you i posted...

aight cool

I would say it's an unusual thing, but it aint. I was working on another piece, when all of a sudden, this one just came out...

...so THIS piece i will drop now. And if/when i complete the other piece, i will decide whether i want to keep this piece up, or put up the other piece.

But as said, this jsur came out. And i felt it so damn suitable...well it's late, so i'm off in a bit...

here it is..(sorry for the crypticism, but then again, that's just the way it is...er...nearly always..!!.)..

PIECE DELETED FOR ORIGINAL ONE

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Okay, so completed the one i was working on originally.

Now i've always said that no piece i write (apart from two before THE 'tragedy' and 'blockage'...) is complete, and probably will never be. Certainly is th case with this one. I mean it's complete in many contexts, but in the sense of the writer, would probably ammend bits here and there in the months, years to come..anyway, just thought i'd say that...

Here it is..



Upon a cold moist sill of rotting wood
I lay to rest my bare sleeping arms
All hot from hellish dreams of inner malign
Blanket lies motionless on hard carpet floor

Through this battered window i wearily gaze
Searching for sweet light amid the glaring pain
To drive’s edge walks this person well dressed
Where sits lonely tramp coughing into his booze

So insane this rage that becomes centre stage
From mere being it erupted in violent bursts
With every tick a kick to the sound of tock
Bottle broken as blood pours slowly draining..

Neither man nor woman but ghastly beast
To let wreak such darkness upon poor souls
Yet blind behind the web of deception we bind
Too much i know that i cannot quite touch

Time slowly fades as i lay here wasting
Truth comes ever clearer as cracks appear
Whispers resound asking of these dark visions
I cry the horror, the humanity, the HUMAN...