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Old 09-08-03, 05:09 PM   #1
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i need help

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well everyone seems to say that i need help on my punch lines, so how do i get better punch lines
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Old 09-09-03, 11:58 AM   #2
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Theres A good article in the 'Tutorials' forum i believe.

try to use wordplay in your punches, makes them more complex.
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Old 09-10-03, 06:40 PM   #3
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Punchlines really are important in a battle so expand your mind dogg. Like RhythmicTendicies said make them complex make, makes it a bigger hit than somethin basic and played.
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Old 09-11-03, 02:11 AM   #4
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right now, I noticed personals are really in style for the vet battles so try and beat people by using their info against them

Ie: signature, avvy, the crew they're affiliated with etc
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Old 09-11-03, 12:14 PM   #5
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Like Bruklor says.... "Practice,Practice,Practice"

But first.....read the tutorials.....
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Old 09-14-03, 02:04 PM   #6
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Damn it takes a lot of practice...That was the best thing said....
U also have to learn how to set up for a punch while keeping flow an not stretching your lines....and complexity is in..

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Old 09-14-03, 04:40 PM   #7
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Answered.......Closed.

And HC......When you're struggling with writing rhymes....just remember that even 2pac,Big and eminem had to start at the bottom......

PZZ and good luck...
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