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Check Check ...........is Dis mic on ??

Somebody Turn My mic on

Aii There it is

check
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bleh...check...

Well as I sit In This Room Alone But Together With ..........
I Finnaly Come To Realize That Life Becomes This............
The Mystery Is Mind Bagaling With .......At The End
Becuase Me and ......... Were alone but It all Depends
On What Was to come On ........ when We were together
Maybe Eternal Life With ......Meant That Life Would Get better
Well if Your Quit Wondering Who ......Really Is
Then Youll Have to ask ....... Where He Lives
Then You Can Visit Him And ask Him Who Is He
That Sitteth In The room alone And Yet Sitteth With Three?
How could that Be .....when Your all Alone Then There is only One
Buut From what I Know is That He Has also Sits with The sun
He sits with the Moon and he even Sits with the stars
He Would Come To Your house If He hade a Car
But Yet And Still He Isnt In My Category Of people to see
When Im All Alone In My room .................With Three
So I Sit In a Room Alone Together With .......*Life*
Bcuz Life Is My Price of Dealing With This Strife
But we know That Sitting Alone Together Is a Bad thing to Do
Because Sitting Alone Together You Might get a visit .......but from who ?

Quickie !

Meh, this was a below average battle in my opinion. It didn't
really seem like either put too much time into developing a solid
idea behind their poems. Stanza, your poem confused the hell out
of me to be quite honest. I was lost with all of ..... and randomness
of your lines. If there was a concrete idea somewhere in there i'm
sorry but i completely missed it. Whyte, not that great from you either
man. I really can't say I was feeling your approach but at least I could
grasp what you were talking about. Kind of simplistic in you wording
and imagery but sometimes that's enough; and in this case it was.

V/ Whyte...more coherent/personal preference

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My vote goes to Whyte Ave. because I was feeling his approach a bit more and was also sensing more creativity and imagery in his piece. Both had a quite unusal approach of topic which I enjoyed to read, good emotion as well but Stanza's wasn't as clear as Whyte Ave's drop in my opinion. I like how both of you kept the vocab rather simple, it gave the poem a more serene yet powerful vibe

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