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08-08-05, 07:55 AM | #1 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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Flow Intelligent vs L. Veracity
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You can find the rules if you follow this link: !Rules! Read em... Check in by Wednesday Pieces due by Friday Voting closes by Sunday Topic: Paranoid
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08-08-05, 08:15 AM | #2 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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hhmmmmm, this should be good...
P.S. don't do a long drawn out piece cuz nobody will wanna read it, lol... |
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08-08-05, 11:01 AM | #3 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 28AD 5545
I never do long drawn out pieces. good luck
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08-12-05, 11:05 AM | #4 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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Paranoid
The Story: A young man named Joe has just committed a murder, his story is as follows........... In a dark alley, a man and a woman are quietly arguing, things escalade and a vicious exchange breaks out, the man reaches for his knife.....the rest is history The blood drips into a wide pool, A lifeless corpse at his feet Wiping his trembling hands off, He thinks, What a fate to meet The knife limply resting inbetween his thumb and his index Prison was inevitable, Murder was worse than committing incest Joe worrily drags the young womans body, To a shadowy spot In hopes no one would see her, And he wouldnt get caught Exiting the alley, He notices a police squad in the distance At that instant, His heart was beating a million times a minute The police car slowed down to a halt, putting light in his face His shoes were worn down, He wasnt ready for this chase A couple seconds later the car dissappeared in the night He took a few more brisk steps, Than ran quickly in fright How did something as little as 5 dollars made him commit murder His intentions were to scare her, He never would have hurt her Later At Home: Joe cleared his mind, Forgetting what he did, As if it werent nothing Paranoid, He searched the dark house, Thinking he heard something The sound was birds humping, Directly outside of his front door Smirking, Joe thought "Yes this bitch is dead, I hated that cunt whore" The next few hours, He sat in the living room with the lights down Wishing he could have got some money, He would be high now His state of paranoia would be obsolete, Almost basically absent Thinking of what he had done, "But hey, Thats all past-tense" Lights start flashing, "Joe Smith, Come out with your hands up" Thinking quickly, He stripped.."Gotta get rid of this damn stuff" He ran to the back of the house, Hoping no one would be there And for the first time in his life he felt helpless, He could see fear Now lets be clear, Joe isnt a pansy or anything of that sort But he's small, Terror in his body when sentenced at court How It All Ends: "I aint coming out, You can come get me if you make it through But i'll release a clip, And connect the dots that i make in you" He runs to the front again, Hoping for a bit of space to move "Come out with your hands up, Or you'll be wasted dude" Paranoid he sits with his hands on his head, wishing it done If only his body had a way out, He'd give it permission to run A can of gas breaks through his window, its' use is suffocation Going through his dirty clothes, Looking for a rag to rub his face in ***BZZZZZZZZZZZZZ....BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ....BZZZZZZZZ ZZZZ*** "Good morning New Hampshire, What a glorious day this will be" Rubbing his face with his hands, He realizes it was only a dream ~!~
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08-12-05, 12:59 PM | #5 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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it's hot as FUCK in my house and I can't concentrate enough to flip this topic into something besides *sings* "somebody's waaaathcing meeeeee"...so have fun in the next round kiddie
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08-12-05, 04:17 PM | #6 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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Well that was easy.
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08-13-05, 02:23 PM | #7 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 10BC 0CC1
Closed, Flow Intelligent continues to the semi-finals due to opponent forfeiting
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