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Old 03-09-05, 10:54 AM   #1
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Da Lyrical Assassin

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This is a Textual Interpertation of An Assassin's Life.......Da Lyrical Assassin... Its kinda long, but u won't be Mad


This target's important because the mark's an informant/
Forced to testity tomorrow due to NARC's & extortion/
He's guarded by four men... in a suite, at the Marriott/
Got orders to off him, so I'll see that they're carried out/
I had talked to intelligence, they outlined the top floor/
Two agents inside the room, two outside of a locked door/
This was all confirmed to me, by some spy's and voyeurs/
I'm set up in a furnished suite, courtesy of my employers/
It's five floors below the target... I'm prone to start this/
With no regard for human life, cuz I'm cold and heartless/
So I depart the room, gun equipped and armed to shoot/
With a couple clips hidden in my custom fitted Armani suit/
I already knew I'd take the stairs.... I came prepared/
Intel said there's no surveillence or agents stationed there/
I explore with optics, then open the door and walk in/
No one spotted, so I ascend up the 5 floors with caution/
I depart the stairwell... & didn't appear to make a noise/
For a second I pause, and listen to hear an agent's voice/
There's no change in ploys, seems it's now in order/
I need to know their locations, so I peep around the corner/
One on each side of the door, talkin' like they're bored/
It's just me and them, cuz noone else occupies the floor/
I take a breath, take a step, and steadily aim the lead/
In a few seconds, I left two embedded in each agents head/
No crash in the hall, there's hardly a thump or a sound/
With backs to the wall, the bodies just slump to the ground/
I walk over and rummage around, start to search 'em/
Looking for the keycard, but nothing is found on the first one/
So I check the second body, it was stored in a pocket/
I grab the keycard, and slide it through the door to unlock it/
Turning the handle without hesitation, i swing it open/
Everything's in focus before the agents can blink or notice/
I'm going in, slow motion, with both of 'em stone frozen/
One on the bed, the other one close to the phone smokin'/
They're both in my line of fire, so I'm aiming the glock/
Towards the agent on the bed, and I got his cranium locked/
Twice it fires, his life expires; the other agent flinched/
So my gun is raised an inch, he becomes the sight advent/
I pull the trigger, a cigarrette drops from the fourth Fed/
Forget the bullshit, I just left a bullet lodged in his forehead/
Intel said four agents, and I just left all of the four dead/
Then I saw the informant, curled up in a ball by the floorvent/
He's shakin' in fright, so I walk over and say to the guy/
"Get on your knees,face the wall and then pray for your life"/
He obeyed and obliged, I can see through the dread/
That's displayed in his eyes, as I put the heat to his head/
Then I let the hammer hit the pin, to nullify the issue/
Let a bullet fly,it ripped through his skull and fried the tissue/
The gray matter in his brain splattered all over the wall/
Now I got to go and retrieve the bodies of those in the hall/
It's not a problem, i just put my gun by my abdomen/
Go and grab a Fed, then one after the other, I drag them in/
More than likely, it'll be an hour before they find these/
Agents dead, so I hit the exit, then close the door behind me/
I begin walkin' towards the stairs, descend five flights/
Take an elevator to the bottom floor prepared to end my night/
After exiting through the lobby, the job is now complete/
So with hands in my pockets I start walkin' down the street/
As I get to the corner I realize that lifes a Fad/
So I pull out my pen and Jot my experience in a Notepad/


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Old 03-09-05, 11:05 AM   #2
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Liked Tha Piece Flow Was Hot Man ........
Structure Was A Little Off Kept Up Tha Wordplay
Keep It Up Man Like Readin Shit Like This
Got A Suggetion For Ya Do A Piece On Not Your Life
But Tha Way You Expected It To Be
Nothing Ever Seems Ta Go Tha Way You Expect So Tell It Like It Should Be
Found This An Easy Way Ta Come Up Wit A New Dirrection For Rap
Ya Know Instead Of Rappin Tha Way Your Life Sucks
Im Tiered Of Hearing That Kinda Shit Makes Me Sick....
Left A Little Feed Man Hope Ya Do Tha Same On Some Of My Open Mics An Shit Holla Back ..........cb83
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Old 03-09-05, 11:06 AM   #3
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will do will do thankz man thankz
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Old 03-09-05, 11:11 AM   #4
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Hey Thats Wat We Here For To Spit Off A Few Thoughts An Get
Quoted.....well Some Muthafuckas In Here Only Care Bout Them Selfes But How Can You Elevate If Someone Dont Pick Out Wat Could Be Changed Ya Know Dawg.......rappers Workin Together Instead Of Against Eachother
Holla ...............cb83
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Old 03-09-05, 11:27 AM   #5
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yep yep preach on brother
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Old 03-09-05, 12:32 PM   #6
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A shit was hot Tony Green liked the vocab structure was okay and flow was good. Tony Green likes hearing about stuff like this me and you should collab do a Guilty Conscience type of thing hit me up. But I'll give it a 8/10! Keep up the good work!

btw repay the favor on my O.M. "Beef is"
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Old 03-11-05, 10:30 AM   #7
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Old 03-11-05, 02:22 PM   #8
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Old 03-30-05, 12:00 PM   #10
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